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Old 04-12-2004, 10:06 AM   #1
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Eternal Regret

prophets of old
spoke of this day
how these chains would be freed
this bondage loosened

i saw him walk on water
but he couldn't stop
herod's hateful spear
from plunging into his fragile side

the world is at war
waterloo and armageddon are at hand
that snake taking of the fruit
his blood cries out from the ground

his merchants with their worthless laws
keep the chains wrapped around
their halos now choking them
their prayers of pride
now condeming them

i was never the one whom he loved
he told me that bird would laugh at me
that simple fisherman this day
shall be a hero today
or at least i thought so

how could you be up on that tree
don't you see what i gave up
with that apple did i choke on a lie?
where are the legions to save my soul?

i caught fish
and he caught men
but who will catch them?
his body broken like that of unleavened bread
blood and water like darkness and light
i wasen't there for him
it was me who put that spear that spear into his side
i hear my voice calling out mocking him so

like napoelon
i can't see past the fosty haze
how could blood free me
snatching victory from the jaws of defeat
Lord never again shall I leave your side
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Old 04-12-2004, 11:18 AM   #2
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Wow, that was a really GREAT poem, hmd. Thanks for sharing.
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Old 04-12-2004, 11:34 AM   #3
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Awesome job, hide...

I love this verse:
his merchants with their worthless laws
keep the chains wrapped around
their halos now choking them
their prayers of pride
now condeming them
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Old 04-12-2004, 11:55 AM   #4
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thanks i'm glad you guys enjoyed it, haven't written anything for a couple of months prior to this. easter got me thinking........
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Old 04-13-2004, 07:27 PM   #5
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yes i Loved It I always find your stuff soul inspiring,,,,ROCK ON
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) yes i Loved It I always find your stuff soul inspiring,,,,ROCK ON

thanks sis next time i'm really pissed i'll write something angry and maybe it won't be so inspiring.
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Old 04-13-2004, 10:16 PM   #7
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Dogstar) Awesome job, hide...

I love this verse:
his merchants with their worthless laws
keep the chains wrapped around
their halos now choking them
their prayers of pride
now condeming them
yes yes Dogstar thats the verse that i found so soul inspiring,, Whoooooooooo
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