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09-22-2003, 11:19 PM
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hey, a song this time
Just a song i wrote, I know the title is a little heavy for some (maybe, maybe not) but its still working (this is my first song) so just tell me what ya think, thanks guys
Kill Me This Way I’m just hiding myself from you again Escaping the wrath of your own sin I’m running away from you again Longing for what I could have been I just cant take this here with you again Just leave me/ let my life begin Just hiding myself from you again Chorus Tear me away I’ve nothing more to say Kill me this way Stealing day after day Wound me today Now its time that you pay you’ve killed me today and its time you pay Another day is stripped away from me you’ve shadowed me so I cannot see Cant you leave me/ let me live today Just go and find another way My soul longs inside to be free Just leave me here/ don’t stay today My soul longs for what it could have been don’t make me hide myself from you again Chorus Tear me away I’ve nothing more to say Kill me this way Stealing day after day Wound me today Now its time that you pay you’ve killed me today and now you’ll pay |
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09-22-2003, 11:22 PM
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That was awesome Creedguy
 
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09-23-2003, 01:32 AM
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Great stuff!!! : )
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09-23-2003, 10:50 AM
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Killer Song There Creed guy 16 i likeD it better than your LAST POEM NO ONFENCE rOCK ON
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ditto
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