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Me Without You
In this world
That is a prison of mine You're a memory And I'm Stuck in time I never wanted anything But I know what I need If I was smarter And I had more to give I'd never let you go If only for my greed Ch. Every time I think of those I love In the pain that I've shared It's never enough Being scared To hold another in my arms Although I'm lonely And have no place to go I've learned that there's nothing sadder Than me with out you Vs2 People say that a broken heart Will mend with time But when your torn apart And haven't got a dime You can't help but think What is on your mind I've never had to steal To get what I need But how I feel Will never subseed It's all a burden That I carry on my chest Even though I'm hurtin It's when I feel the best Rpt Ch. Bridge Maybe I was born to live this way Maybe I was torn by what I say But if I was only better that I was I'd have more in my life And I'd give you all I could If only I could get it right Rpt Ch Nothing's sadder than Me With Out You
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05-12-2003, 08:27 AM
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that's nice
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05-13-2003, 12:35 PM
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That was great! Good job!!!
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05-13-2003, 02:43 PM
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I loved it
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05-13-2003, 11:48 PM
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Wow..very nice...
 am sooo glad to see another poet/writer in here...I hope you keep posting I really enjoy reading what you are saying..I like the part after the bridge best... "Maybe I was born to live this way" "Maybe I was torn by what to say"
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05-14-2003, 12:30 AM
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Def. something a lot of people can relate too...great job..thanks
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