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Wiseman or a Fool
I can be that wise man
Sitting on a hill Meditating Knowing just how you feel Or I could be that fool Standing in the rain Not knowing Even my own pain Ch. Am I wise Or just a fool Am I in disguise Or just acting fool Maybe just for fun I'll touch the sun Or to be cute I'll try to substitute Vs.2 I can be that king Sitting on his throne Feeling alive But mostly alone And I can be the one Who is always there With alot to learn And nothing to share Rpt. Ch (rpt five times) I'm a wise man No I'm a fool Rpt Ch
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very nicely done. very very very good. I haven't seen stuff liek that in awhile. thanks Garrison
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That's cool!You're an awesome writer!
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07-09-2003, 10:57 PM
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That's a really nice poem.
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Today I'm gonna try a little harder Gonna make every minute last longer Gonna learn to forgive and forget 'Cause we don't have long Gonna make the most of it Today I'm gonna love my enemies Reach out to somebody who needs me Make a change, make the world a better place 'Cause tomorrow could be one day too late --lyrics from "One Day Too Late" by Skillet from their new album "Awake" |
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07-10-2003, 10:35 PM
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cool lyrics...enjoyed them...thanks for sharing
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07-11-2003, 09:22 PM
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Hi,
This is a very well written piece. It flows well and the imagery is brilliant!! Very nice!!!
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07-12-2003, 06:41 PM
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Yes, what they said. Welcome to the BB. I'd like to see more of your stuff.
PS ANN ALLUSION - that's a cool effing name!!!
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