You and I

Dogstar · 04-13-2004, 01:04 AM

So you’re on your own now
Nothing but a faded memory
You and I

So far away from what we were
Nothing but a dusty shelf
You and I

Pull me down
Push me over
Bait me

So you tread on hopeless wish
Nothing but a broken dream
You and I

So you drain a bleeding heart
Nothing but an empty frame
You and I

Pull me down
Push me over
Hate me

So you cling to someone new
Nothing but an afterthought
You and I

So you utter another vow
Nothing but a house of cards
You and I

Pull me down
Push me over
Waste me

SmilinSkullRing · 04-13-2004, 02:53 AM

Pretty good! I like that!

I like these two lines:

So you drain a bleeding heart
Nothing but an empty frame

aussiecreeder · 04-13-2004, 03:40 AM

good job again i also like those same lines!

Dogstar · 04-13-2004, 12:53 PM

Thanks a bunch, you guys. Glad you liked it!

Aimee · 04-13-2004, 02:20 PM

These are great lyrics you come up with, Kerri. I might snag some when I start my little goth band

Dogstar · 04-13-2004, 02:30 PM

LOL, thanks, Aimee!

The Lithium · 04-13-2004, 03:27 PM

I really liked the picture you painted me there, but if you really wanna get me to buy the picture you gotta try more rhyme next time. Don't get me wrong, I liked it, but try rhyme next time, that would be awesome!

Dogstar · 04-13-2004, 03:29 PM

LOL, I rhyme most of the time, so I wanted to try something different. And I think you don't always have to rhyme to paint an effective picture. But thanks for your input, Lith!

creedsister · 04-13-2004, 06:53 PM

I liked it Dogstar it sounds like someone Got set up for a downfall, i liked it

Dogstar · 04-13-2004, 08:51 PM

Thanks, creedsister. Glad you enjoyed it.

04-13-2004, 01:04 AM	#1
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,348 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	You and I So you’re on your own now Nothing but a faded memory You and I So far away from what we were Nothing but a dusty shelf You and I Pull me down Push me over Bait me So you tread on hopeless wish Nothing but a broken dream You and I So you drain a bleeding heart Nothing but an empty frame You and I Pull me down Push me over Hate me So you cling to someone new Nothing but an afterthought You and I So you utter another vow Nothing but a house of cards You and I Pull me down Push me over Waste me __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

04-13-2004, 12:53 PM	#4
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,348 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Thanks a bunch, you guys. Glad you liked it! __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

04-13-2004, 02:20 PM	#5
Aimee USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 822 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	These are great lyrics you come up with, Kerri. I might snag some when I start my little goth band __________________ The capacity for passion is both cruel and divine. George Sand - 1834

04-13-2004, 02:30 PM	#6
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,348 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	LOL, thanks, Aimee! __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

04-13-2004, 03:29 PM	#8
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,348 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	LOL, I rhyme most of the time, so I wanted to try something different. And I think you don't always have to rhyme to paint an effective picture. But thanks for your input, Lith! __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

04-13-2004, 06:53 PM	#9
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	I liked it Dogstar it sounds like someone Got set up for a downfall, i liked it __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

04-13-2004, 08:51 PM	#10
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,348 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Thanks, creedsister. Glad you enjoyed it. __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

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