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Crawl Low
You love him because he’s kind and innocent.
You love her because she’s got a mind and is insubordinate. The world despises both of you because it is run by vileness. It throws you both to being feral in the wilderness. You both take steps together through the hard times When all the world does to return the favor is apply you with tons of fines. You toss your dimes, Lay your cuss, But what is the fuss, It is just going to continue in loops, You will just keep staring down at the insipid hula-hoops. Because the truth is, Kindness is blindness, Innocence is ignorance, Insubordination seems to pilot the nation. Sure, it is hard to swallow, Even harder to follow. And all it will cause is for you to crawl low. Look up and see you are still here, Same old fear. Nothing to cash, Because the world’s too rash. You are lovers because of your thoughts, But the pain you experience is lots, Times come and times go, Just like lies bum and the amount of tries are low. Oh you are lovers because she’s kind and innocent. He’s got a mind and is insubordinate. But there’s something you both ought to know, However your twisted story does go. Kindness is blindness, Innocence is ignorance. Insubordination pilots the relation. It is hard to swallow, Even harder to follow. And all it will do to both of you, Is make you both crawl low.
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I love it! Great words ! This is my favorite part:
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World sucks ~~~loved it torn
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything 
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Yea, that "kindness is blindness" part is really awesome!!!
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02-06-2004, 12:27 PM
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Yes. It sounds like a good crash song. Well-Done!
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AWESOME, Torn Signs. Very well-done!
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