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Old 11-20-2003, 04:12 AM   #1
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Delusion

Didn’t mean to cry last night
I found the answer, got it right
I saw you drifting, didn’t ask
Now you’re gone, can’t get past

The other day I heard our song
Made me think you had it wrong
Why’d you have to pay the price
For falling hard upon the ice

Others see through foggy eyes
Stumble forward, no disguise
So unfair you couldn’t see
Delusion kept you far from free

Didn’t mean to cry last night
I found the answer, got it right
I saw you slipping, didn’t try
Now you’re gone, dusk is nigh

At the lake we sometimes talk
Bait in hand, the fish you stalk
Behind the wheel, young and smug
Crashed the wall, a hole you dug

Swore I saw you in a dream
Flashed that smile, so sure you seemed
Don’t you cry, you said so sweet
The angels take good care of me

Didn’t mean to cry last night
I found the answer, got it right
I saw you happy, so I thought
Now you’re gone, peace you bought
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Old 11-20-2003, 01:33 PM   #2
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 11-20-2003, 01:34 PM   #3
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 11-21-2003, 02:45 AM   #4
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Thanks, creedsister!
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Old 11-21-2003, 06:17 AM   #5
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great stuff can you sing? if so find yourself a band!
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Old 11-21-2003, 03:12 PM   #6
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LOL, hide, thank you...I can sing some, but not good enough for a band, hehehe.
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Old 11-21-2003, 06:15 PM   #7
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Another awesome poem Kerri! LOVED IT!!!!
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Old 11-22-2003, 12:20 AM   #8
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Well, find people that can play, but can't write! LOL
That was completely awesome!
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"...My beaten heart is in your hands, What I really need is shelter, And a chance to relearn love, Teach me all over, All over to relearn love, Show me again, So I can relearn love, The comfort of your arms around me, Your tender hands caress my head, I lay beside you, I'm not worthy..."
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Old 11-22-2003, 12:41 AM   #9
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LOL, thanks so much Creed_Defaultgirl.
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Old 11-22-2003, 12:48 AM   #10
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Your very welcome Dogstar! Cool avatar!
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Old 11-22-2003, 12:52 AM   #11
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Heh, thanks...
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Old 11-22-2003, 12:59 AM   #12
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Yeah, snoopy rocks!
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