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11-07-2009, 01:17 AM | #1 |
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Guilty Dream
He puts his hand above me
As if in control Demanding my loyalty I'm not yours No, I'm not I will not bow I will not get on my knees I will not break My resolve in defiance is unbreakable I won't cave I grabbed a bat And took it to your head Smashed in your skull Smash, smash, smash! I'm a raging, blazing fire horse There is no stopping this bludgeoning The heart stops The pain stops My gut drops Guilt takes form I turn myself in Helped by few The verdict isint in But nothing can hurt me more Than killing you I drop to my knees and tear My father comes over and consoles me The rest just pass on by I awake What a dream Napping was a mistake Where did this come from?
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I grabbed A bat And Took It To Your Head Smashed In Your Skull Sounds Like Warfare Potery The one thing that grabs me about this piece is this line THE VERDICT IS,INT IN its something we all feel in battle wating on that certian area to be comfortred or up lifted or heared But out of all new stuff you,ve shared wit us This Is My Favorite So Far
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Cool, this was actually based off a dream I had.
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Cool Thanks For Sharing Nagpo like i said its one of my favorites i,ll get to the others later
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