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Old 11-07-2009, 01:17 AM   #1
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Guilty Dream

He puts his hand above me
As if in control
Demanding my loyalty

I'm not yours
No, I'm not

I will not bow
I will not get on my knees
I will not break
My resolve in defiance is unbreakable

I won't cave

I grabbed a bat
And took it to your head
Smashed in your skull

Smash, smash, smash!

I'm a raging, blazing fire horse
There is no stopping this bludgeoning

The heart stops
The pain stops
My gut drops
Guilt takes form

I turn myself in
Helped by few
The verdict isint in
But nothing can hurt me more
Than killing you

I drop to my knees and tear
My father comes over and consoles me
The rest just pass on by

I awake
What a dream
Napping was a mistake
Where did this come from?
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Old 11-10-2009, 08:33 PM   #2
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Re: Guilty Dream

I grabbed A bat And Took It To Your Head Smashed In Your Skull Sounds Like Warfare Potery The one thing that grabs me about this piece is this line THE VERDICT IS,INT IN its something we all feel in battle wating on that certian area to be comfortred or up lifted or heared But out of all new stuff you,ve shared wit us This Is My Favorite So Far
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Cool, this was actually based off a dream I had.
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Old 11-12-2009, 10:56 AM   #4
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Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) Cool, this was actually based off a dream I had.
Cool Thanks For Sharing Nagpo like i said its one of my favorites i,ll get to the others later
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