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GarrisonMC 05-09-2003 07:23 PM

Me Without You
 
In this world
That is a prison of mine
You're a memory
And I'm Stuck in time

I never wanted anything
But I know what I need
If I was smarter
And I had more to give
I'd never let you go
If only for my greed

Ch.
Every time I think of those I love
In the pain that I've shared
It's never enough
Being scared
To hold another in my arms
Although I'm lonely
And have no place to go
I've learned that there's nothing sadder
Than me with out you

Vs2

People say that a broken heart
Will mend with time
But when your torn apart
And haven't got a dime
You can't help but think
What is on your mind

I've never had to steal
To get what I need
But how I feel
Will never subseed
It's all a burden
That I carry on my chest
Even though I'm hurtin
It's when I feel the best

Rpt Ch.

Bridge

Maybe I was born to live this way
Maybe I was torn by what I say
But if I was only better that I was
I'd have more in my life
And I'd give you all I could
If only I could get it right

Rpt Ch

Nothing's sadder than
Me With Out You

Siana 05-12-2003 08:27 AM

that's nice:)

creedgirl99 05-13-2003 12:35 PM

That was great! Good job!!!

JulieCitySlicker 05-13-2003 02:43 PM

I loved it;)

goddess_bb 05-13-2003 11:48 PM

Wow..very nice...:clap: :clap: :clap:

am sooo glad to see another poet/writer in here...I hope you keep posting I really enjoy reading what you are saying..I like the part after the bridge best...
"Maybe I was born to live this way"
"Maybe I was torn by what to say"

cjme 05-14-2003 12:30 AM

Def. something a lot of people can relate too...great job..thanks


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