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MissSeeker 06-04-2005 09:38 AM

Free
 
Free

another day rises
I try to remember myself
I hear your voice in my head
ready to waste my day
watching me, judging me

it's always the same
I know where I came from
and these games you play are wasted on me
I stay myself even when I'm hurt and empty
even when I'm scared and alone

manifastation of power
I'm just a woman I don't matter
you'll show me my place
you won't listen
but your contradictions always reveal you

you'll direct the place where my dreams go
you'll decide to whom I give my love
with noone left to trust
I'm still the child of the new time
meaning I can be whoever I choose

you'd rather keep me
in a cage where I give without recieving
where you suck me out so there's nothing more to give
and all that I am given
is payed in blood

it's just so easy
showing who holds the strings
proving it on the weakest members of society
and in this hypocrite country
you'd think we're all protected

you have your ways above the law
to show us where we stand
you hate me because I'm fearless
you hate me because you can't walk over me
you hate me because you can't feed my mind with lies

you pluck the flowers before they can bloom
and all close their eyes
they won't care for a stranger
you won't let me find my way
but you'll show me where I stand

too bad I can't close my eyes
too bad I'll fight till the end
I won't let the mindless lead my way
eventually all you'll see
is you can't stop me from being free

Ann Allusion 06-04-2005 12:23 PM

strikes me as quite controling and a bit political...you presented it very well...:rockon:

HR2004 06-04-2005 11:06 PM

WOW you are a writting machine they all are awesome but I mean you post like 2 per day I cant keep up with you!anyways liked it alot!Keep writting

creedsister 06-05-2005 12:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ann Allusion
strikes me as quite controling and a bit political...you presented it very well...:rockon:

if you read it that way :) i dont find it polictical at all ;) but it was awsome Misseeker

MissSeeker 06-05-2005 07:09 AM

Thank you all for your kind words. It's about power games and controle in general, it's open to interpretation. :peacelove


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