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HR2004 02-22-2005 06:07 PM

thoughts
 
My eyes warm..
Crying in sight.
The thoughts take flight.
Thoughts that stay with me.
A new relationship makes me happy.
But the thoughts that haunt.
Stap me right through the heart.
The tears make a crooked path down my cheek.
I fear the thought.
But I am weak.
My spirts dim.
Too afraid to depend on us.
Thoughts still racing.
The shadows changing.
As night moves on.
I should sleep...
But the thoughts keep me awake.
We all have our thoughts
Our doubts.
Thoughts of jealously that overcame me...
Thoughts of anger I felt.
So scared of messing up.
Afriad of ruining this.
Thoughts I hope dont escape from me.
Thoughts Im glad stay in my head.

creedsister 02-22-2005 08:09 PM

Awsome Awsome Awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :jam: :jam:

HR2004 02-22-2005 10:18 PM

thanx this one just came too me.But in a way i think theres more to be added i dont know maybe its fine the way it is.

creedsister 02-22-2005 10:23 PM

its cool the way it is :smokin:

HR2004 02-23-2005 03:53 PM

thanx.

Anna1011 02-23-2005 04:00 PM

i wish i could write stuff like you guys do, you are all so f**king fantastic
and that was fantastic aswell HR2004 :)

creedsister 02-23-2005 08:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HR2004
thanx.

your welcome

HR2004 02-23-2005 11:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Anna1011
i wish i could write stuff like you guys do, you are all so f**king fantastic
and that was fantastic aswell HR2004 :)


LoL your stuff is good too but thanks for the complement!


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