Love of the Knife
 

I just wrote this seconds ago along with "Chaos". :D


"I wish I could touch the sky and start to fly
I wish I could breath,but Im about to leave
I can feel it coming, soon to be the ending
The ending of it all, now I begin to fall

The ending of this chapter,the ending of my life
The ending to the twisted chapter entitled "Love of The Knife"

As I fall to my death,I close my eyes and hold my breath
I think of things I should have done, I should have loved You and accepted Your Son
I only thought of me, but that could never set me free
I sinned my whole broken life,I cursed my friends and beat my wife

The ending of this chapter,the ending of my life
The ending to the twisted chapter entitled "Love of The Knife"

The end is coming closer now
Im so lost and I dont know how
How I ever ended up this way
I had my fun,but now I have to pay
We have to pay for these choices we make
We cant live for ourselves and take take take
All the things I've done,no one knows
But my time is up,this chapter is finally closed

A new chapter to begin,I have somthing brand new within
Something I never felt before,somthing that has me begging for more
I have a new hope pushing me on, carrying me through and keeping me strong
I now have the hope that You will be there for me,when I am weak and cannot walk you will carry me"

Hope ya like it! :D I tricked ya,I tricked ya!!! You probly thought this would be some suicidal writing,but its not,hehe.

I love that one!

Thanks alot :D

This is awesome. I like it a bit more then Chaos because of the ending. It's surprising and it's interesting how the narrator has found some hope. The end of a chapter, it's actually a positive view to look upon. Congrats. ;)

Hey seeks i loved that on~~this is the verse i love the most~~Something I never Felt Before something That has me begging For Me~~FIRE that rocked!!! :D

Thank alot you two :D

Very nice, MrSeeker! Kind of out with old and in with the new.

Thanks :D

i loved the whole spouse beating thing great job :D

Thanks :D

SICKO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL haha

THANK YOU :stappchic THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!!!!!

were are you!!!!

Im right here. why?

I liked it Kevin :D
I would've responded earlier but I havn't looked in here for a while :)