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benkenobi 03-08-2005 11:30 PM

Flip
 
Ok...here's my poetic online debut (I have several more poems), but this particular one directly relates to the man behind the skins of Alter Bridge/Creed...our man...Mr. Scott (Flip) Phillips!!! I wrote this for an English assignment by the way...YAY!!!
- Ben

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“Flip”

Hear Flip!

Your cadence thrives in the hearts and souls
Of millions of followers and listeners of old,

Skins are stretched tight over the drums
Clashing bright cymbals gold as the sun,

The backbone of pulse progressing through the stage
Interweaving melody and rhythms to a colossal maze,

And the roaring of the crowds greet the sounds that you fill
Once more until nations of worlds apart experience the thrill,

Flip the sticks once more
Take flight, let loose, soar…


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Anna1011 03-09-2005 04:44 AM

really really good, i loved it :)

creedsister 03-09-2005 10:25 AM

:jam: made me wanna Grab some sticks too i liked it

Anna1011 03-09-2005 10:27 AM

same here such a great debut :D

Ann Allusion 03-09-2005 06:15 PM

nicely written...:rockon:

benkenobi 03-09-2005 08:38 PM

Thank you all for the compliments! I have other poems that are more religious in tone and such. I might put up a few of these later. Anyways, I've read many of the poems on this board, and absolutely love them.

- Ben


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