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GarrisonMC 06-25-2003 10:38 PM

Wiseman or a Fool
 
I can be that wise man
Sitting on a hill
Meditating
Knowing just how you feel

Or I could be that fool
Standing in the rain
Not knowing
Even my own pain

Ch.
Am I wise
Or just a fool
Am I in disguise
Or just acting fool
Maybe just for fun
I'll touch the sun
Or to be cute
I'll try to substitute

Vs.2
I can be that king
Sitting on his throne
Feeling alive
But mostly alone

And I can be the one
Who is always there
With alot to learn
And nothing to share

Rpt. Ch

(rpt five times)
I'm a wise man
No I'm a fool

Rpt Ch

CollectiveSoul 06-27-2003 08:30 PM

very nicely done. very very very good. I haven't seen stuff liek that in awhile. thanks Garrison

PaulMcCoygirl 06-29-2003 12:22 AM

That's cool!You're an awesome writer! :jam:

Higher_Desire 07-09-2003 10:57 PM

That's a really nice poem. :)


H-D

Ann Allusion 07-10-2003 10:35 PM

cool lyrics...enjoyed them...thanks for sharing

peace

HESTLA'S HONEY 07-11-2003 09:22 PM

Hi,

This is a very well written piece. It flows well and the imagery is brilliant!! Very nice!!!

Aimee 07-12-2003 06:41 PM

Yes, what they said. Welcome to the BB. I'd like to see more of your stuff.
PS ANN ALLUSION - that's a cool effing name!!!


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