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Wiseman or a Fool
I can be that wise man
Sitting on a hill Meditating Knowing just how you feel Or I could be that fool Standing in the rain Not knowing Even my own pain Ch. Am I wise Or just a fool Am I in disguise Or just acting fool Maybe just for fun I'll touch the sun Or to be cute I'll try to substitute Vs.2 I can be that king Sitting on his throne Feeling alive But mostly alone And I can be the one Who is always there With alot to learn And nothing to share Rpt. Ch (rpt five times) I'm a wise man No I'm a fool Rpt Ch |
very nicely done. very very very good. I haven't seen stuff liek that in awhile. thanks Garrison
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That's cool!You're an awesome writer! :jam:
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That's a really nice poem. :)
H-D |
cool lyrics...enjoyed them...thanks for sharing
peace |
Hi,
This is a very well written piece. It flows well and the imagery is brilliant!! Very nice!!! |
Yes, what they said. Welcome to the BB. I'd like to see more of your stuff.
PS ANN ALLUSION - that's a cool effing name!!! |
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