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Dogstar 08-29-2007 10:53 PM

Moonlit Madness
 
The moonlight drips down her arms
As she flirts with the lilting waves
Tickling her toes at the edge of the sea
Such a tease she is, not quite ready to jump in

The nonstop symphony plays in her head
As she skirts the shore, eyes closed
Daring her ever more to push it out
Such a tease she is, not quite ready to chime in

The darkness dances around her
As she swings in rhythm, pleasure flowing
Drawing her closer to the rising tide
Such a tease she is, not quite ready to suck it in

The ocean calls out her name
As she whispers the words in time
Plunging into the swirling undertow
Such a tease she was, now quite ready to give in

HeavensOnFire 09-02-2007 12:26 PM

Re: Moonlit Madness
 
the darkness dances around her i liked that line Dog thank you so so much for sharing with us it was very CALMING to read .....a lot going on with that one dog you can actually feel more of the pices collabarating in that one the visual is seen through that is a refreshing grasp of something undefined and your breathe is breathing just a short grasp of that beauty of the dark depth tide of the ocean as to whale soaring up out of the depths of the sea with her young breathing in the breath of life

Dogstar 09-03-2007 07:08 PM

Re: Moonlit Madness
 
Thank you, as always :)

HeavensOnFire 09-04-2007 07:10 PM

Re: Moonlit Madness
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Dogstar
Thank you, as always :)

NO thank YOU AS ALWAYS!!! DOGGY


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