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SCOTTSMYMAN
01-09-2004, 08:13 PM
Sleep my love
No more pain
Close your eyes
Listen to the rain
Silent slumber
Mind is still
Dreaming sweetly
Heart no longer ill
Feel the warmth
Of the peace
No sounds, no thoughts
Body at ease
To not wake up
To always be safe
From the hurt and confusion
That only I gave
So, sleep my dear friend
Sleep until tomorrow
Until the sun warms your face
Until there is no more sorrow
creedsister
01-09-2004, 09:16 PM
Very comfy poem kris
WeatheredWoman
01-09-2004, 11:00 PM
Beautiful, Beautiful!!!
:hugs:
Dogstar
01-10-2004, 02:26 AM
Wow, wonderful, Kris!!!! I love that last verse!
btw...your sigs ROCK :D!
MrSeeker
01-10-2004, 02:29 AM
Yea,that was very nice :D
SCOTTSMYMAN
01-10-2004, 02:59 PM
Thanks guys. I haven't been writing for awhile and then all of a sudden!
btw...your sigs ROCK
I keep changing it because I love them all and can't decide which one a really want! Lately though I have been obsessed with The Noose!
Sheila63
01-10-2004, 07:22 PM
Great poem, Kris!! It's such a comforting poem. :)
Dogstar
01-10-2004, 07:30 PM
Thanks guys. I haven't been writing for awhile and then all of a sudden!
I keep changing it because I love them all and can't decide which one a really want! Lately though I have been obsessed with The Noose!
LMAO, I hear ya...I'm still obsessed with Pet...I can't tell you how many times I hit repeat on that one...
SCOTTSMYMAN
01-11-2004, 06:28 PM
I'm obsessed with that one too!
Torn Signs
01-13-2004, 08:07 AM
Awesome, delicately put together yet charming, definately worth reading.
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