Neurotic

[MrSeeker]

"No inspiration left to write this song
I dont care anymore and we both knew it all along
That no matter how hard I tried to be real
I would always be fake,so damn fake
I make up lies only to my demise
One million failure's out of one million tries

Place the noose around my neck
You know you want to (you know I want you to)

A loss of passion and a loss of hope
No strength to carry on and no strength to cope
Left in a forgotten world that only hate's and takes
A piece of me each day
And near the valley of the damned
You will see our mangled bodys lay


Put the knife to my throat
You know you want to (you know I want you to)

Dropped from the sky to defend myself against
A world that only wants me dead
Forced to listen to every lying word you ever said
The more I see of you,the less I see of me
The more I cry for help,the more I tend to bleed

(The more I try,the more they eat me alive)

Put the knife to my heart
You know you want to and you know I want you to

Im breathless and death is my only defense
I was born torn into this worldly mess
Forever wishing for something new
Forever wishing for someone like you
To come along and take me somewhere I belong"

I just wrote it, hope ya like it ;)
Sorry for that small profanity,I wanted to get the point across,I'll take it out if you's want me to...

[Dogstar]

WOW, that's really heavy, MrSeeker, and very well done. Very good imagery as well.

This is my favorite part:
A loss of passion and a loss of hope
No strength to carry on and no strength to cope
Left in a forgotten world that only hate's and takes
A piece of me each day
And near the valley of the damned
You will see our mangled bodys lay

[MrSeeker]

Thank's alot :D

[creedsister]

"No inspiration left to write this song
I dont care anymore and we both knew it all along
That no matter how hard I tried to be real
I would always be fake,so damn fake
I make up lies only to my demise
One million failure's out of one million tries

Place the noose around my neck
You know you want to (you know I want you to)

A loss of passion and a loss of hope
No strength to carry on and no strength to cope
Left in a forgotten world that only hate's and takes
A piece of me each day
And near the valley of the damned
You will see our mangled bodys lay


Put the knife to my throat
You know you want to (you know I want you to)

Dropped from the sky to defend myself against
A world that only wants me dead
Forced to listen to every lying word you ever said
The more I see of you,the less I see of me
The more I cry for help,the more I tend to bleed

(The more I try,the more they eat me alive)

Put the knife to my heart
You know you want to and you know I want you to

Im breathless and death is my only defense
I was born torn into this worldly mess
Forever wishing for something new
Forever wishing for someone like you
To come along and take me somewhere I belong"

I just wrote it, hope ya like it ;)
Sorry for that small profanity,I wanted to get the point across,I'll take it out if you's want me to... Mrseeker that was very Deep i like it my brother i really liked the last verses Killer

[MrSeeker]

Thanks Ta :D

[creedsister]

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