Garden of Pain

[njcreedite]

Suicidal thoughts seep through
your reality
Dark colors of pain drip in your sky
Waking up in empty sleep from
dreams that don't exist
Running down the path of nonethingness
and lies

Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
May all that you believe in
turn to rust

Taste the sweetness of black water full
of vile elements
Wash down your bitter life with the
branches of my trees
Acrid smells of your disgust blow
by in haste
The palette of lifeless colors bleeding
into your disease


Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
An eternity of death you
can not trust

[creedsister]

Wow that was amazing I really liked wakeing up in empty sleep from Dreams that dont exisit

[creedsister]

Wow that was amazing I really liked wakeing up in empty sleep from Dreams that dont exisit and this line i liked best ASHES TO ASHES DUST TO DUST AN ETERNITY OF DEATH YOU CAN NOT TRUST}}killer :D :D :D

[njcreedite]

:o Wow thanks for the kind words Creedsister.

[creedsister]

Aww~~your welcome :)

[SCOTTSMYMAN]

Yes, Linda! Awesome poem you go girl! So, glad to see you sharing more of your writings! Keep it up!

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yeah the line Dogstar liked I think is the best line of the song, and I think I see a bit of a Stapp influence there! :)

[creedsister]

yeah the line Dogstar liked I think is the best line of the song, and I think I see a bit of a Stapp influence there! :) yeah i see a lot of stapp influnence in a lot a people here

[njcreedite]

yeah i see a lot of stapp influnence in a lot a people here


:confused: Really?