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Torn Signs
12-26-2003, 12:58 PM
Thumps, footsteps, voices, murmers
Breaths reethe on, time endless,
Hearts surround and hold in the time of rejoice.
Love is pleasant and hatred unruly.
I pull out my weapon and prepare to aim.
I see the opposite soul-
Living, breathing, has memories, has places to go and things to do.
I creep closer, quiet, boundless, nerves rattling, blood pumping ludicrously.
One-
Two-
Three-,
My aim is right on my target.
A shriek more propsterous then this world.
Escape.
-I saved the enemy.

In return his reflexes put a metal shard in my heart.
So much for saving souls-
Lost and gone-forever.

Thumps, footsteps, murmers,
And breaths reethe on anyway.

MrSeeker
12-26-2003, 09:17 PM
Very good as usual Kim :D

creedsister
12-27-2003, 12:10 AM
wow,,torn,,moving

Creed_Defaultgirl
12-30-2003, 01:15 AM
That was good, I really like this one.

Aimee
01-05-2004, 09:41 AM
Kim- love the visuals & emotion in this one.