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Sheila63
12-24-2003, 04:21 PM
There's a cloud of doubt
hanging over me,
Was it something I said or
something I did,
You took my trust and
destroyed it in an instant,
Now my perspective is forever changed
because of your need for control,
You might have scarred me for a time
but I won't allow you to break me

TeriB19
12-24-2003, 05:00 PM
Great poem Sheila!!! Very touching!

Dogstar
12-24-2003, 09:15 PM
Well done, Sheila! That lays it all on the line!

SCOTTSMYMAN
12-25-2003, 10:29 AM
Sheila, I love it! :clap: I hope you plan on writing more!

Aimee
01-05-2004, 09:42 AM
This poem shows your inner strength Sheila. You go girl!