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The Lithium
12-21-2003, 03:57 PM
Well, what can I say? I wrote this awhile ago and... Why not share it? Here you go!

Breaking Througe:
There's a million tears streaming down today
Promise myself to never do the same misstake again
I'm missing you, believe in you
People pray for you today
Promise myself to never cry again
I'm tursting you, loving you

Now I've realized that tomorrow is today
Promise myself to never waste time again
I'm seeing you, hearing you
I never want to feel what I feel today
Promise myself to never walk away again
I'm trying to, forget you

But it doesn't really matter
You're gone
You were right

The dark shines bright today
Promise myself to never be dazzled again
I'm calling you, losing you
Wish I could break through today
Promise myself to never be found again
I'm understanding you, visualizing you

But it doesn't really matter
You're gone
And you were right

And it doesn't really matter
I'm here
I wasn't right

Creed_Defaultgirl
12-21-2003, 04:35 PM
That's great! Thanks for sharing with us!

The Lithium
12-21-2003, 04:48 PM
I'm just writing whatever's on my mind.

Thanks for having me!

Dogstar
12-21-2003, 04:58 PM
Lith, way to go! Nicely done...Love the emotion in it.

creedsister
12-21-2003, 11:43 PM
I'm just writing whatever's on my mind.

Thanks for having me! Killer poem litch ;)

The Lithium
12-22-2003, 04:57 AM
Killer poem litch ;)

That's my thing! ;) Glad you guys liked it!

Torn Signs
12-22-2003, 07:56 AM
yea, awesome job!!! ;)

The Lithium
12-22-2003, 08:54 AM
Thanks. I write a lot. And I'm not even 15 yet! :D I am in a week! :smokin:

creedsister
12-22-2003, 09:16 PM
yea, awesome job!!! ;) word

The Lithium
12-23-2003, 04:25 AM
Thanks again guys. I just write whatever may come from my heart.

creedsister
12-23-2003, 10:29 PM
litch i dont mean to sound stoopid but who in the heck is the dude on your avatar? :wtf:

hide
12-25-2003, 10:01 PM
great stuff keep it up writing poetry, painting whatever does wonders!

The Lithium
03-05-2004, 08:37 AM
great stuff keep it up writing poetry, painting whatever does wonders!


I'm sure I will! :D