The Calling

[Dogstar]

On the edge of six feet down
Clutches marker words of stone
Doesn’t understand the why
Never could now can’t atone

Little boy blue is lost on you
Doesn’t follow unspoken rules
Cannot be the man so young
Open scorn a hatred fueled

Abandoned child left to fly
Little Mary he dared to cry
Ridiculed for spine so weak
Secret garden gets him high

Donning robe of black and white
Forced to swallow head held tight
Can’t confess now must suppress
Watches father bless the night

On the edge of six feet down
Clutches rope why cast in stone
Hears the angels call for him
Surrenders now to world unknown

[The Lithium]

Soooo?

[Dogstar]

:confused:

[TeriB19]

Very very deep. Really thought provoking.

[The Lithium]

Very very deep. Really thought provoking.

Alright, the lyric was okay, but I like Stapp lyrics more than Alex's. (Alex Band = front man in The Calling). After all, this is a Creed board.

[Dogstar]

It's just a title for my poem, extreme lithium. It has nothing to do the band The Calling. And this is the Creative Corner forum where people can post their creative musings.

[The Lithium]

Oh, sorry... The funny thing about it is that Alex could've wrote it, his lyrics often kind of seem like... That! :D Well the lyric were... Well, good. I better check here often, maybe I could post a lyric of mine.

(Call me Lith).

[Dogstar]

LOL, well, thanks, Lith, I think ;)...I really don't know many of The Calling's songs. I'll have to check them out some more.

[The Lithium]

Yeah, actually you're a little mini-Alex! :D I'm more like a mini-Stapp! :smokin:

[Dogstar]

Hehehehe...you should post some of your stuff here. It's fun to read what's going on in other people's heads.

[The Lithium]

Of course I will! :D I'll just check my PM first! :D

[Creed_Defaultgirl]

Another great one by Dogstar! That was deep, as Teri said.

[Dogstar]

Thanks, you guys!!

[creedsister]

Alright, the lyric was okay, but I like Stapp lyrics more than Alex's. (Alex Band = front man in The Calling). After all, this is a Creed board. well lord bless me,,whats that got to do with anything I loved Dogstars poem,,It was Deep :)

[SCOTTSMYMAN]

Another wonderful poem Kerri! :clap:

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not sure if this is a postive for Dogstar or a negative for the guy from The Calling perhaps both but Dogstar's lyrics blow his out of the water. Dogstar seriously do you sing? As in good enough to be a lead singer in a band?

[creedsister]

Soooo,,true

[Dogstar]

not sure if this is a postive for Dogstar or a negative for the guy from The Calling perhaps both but Dogstar's lyrics blow his out of the water. Dogstar seriously do you sing? As in good enough to be a lead singer in a band?
Hide, you are too kind :)...I can sing, but I'm not sure I have the pipes to be a lead singer professionally. I could probably be a ballad-type or acoustic-type singer, but not really good enough to make a living at it, LOL...Besides, I'm probably a bit too old for that lifestyle, LOL...:D

[Sincirr]

You are very tallented, Dogstar!

[Sincirr]

Whatever U decide to do with your stuff, thanks for sharing it here.

[creedsister]

Hide, you are too kind :)...I can sing, but I'm not sure I have the pipes to be a lead singer professionally. I could probably be a ballad-type or acoustic-type singer, but not really good enough to make a living at it, LOL...Besides, I'm probably a bit too old for that lifestyle, LOL...:D NEVER TO OLD DOGSTAR TO ROCK,, :)

[Dogstar]

Awww, thanks, you guys...you are too kind...and you're welcome, sincirr :).

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Awww, thanks, you guys...you are too kind...and you're welcome, sincirr :).

hey your welcome and i was been serious its really great stuff too bad most lead singers out there can't or don't write lyrics of substance. hey and besides i'm sure you can still rock with a walking stick in hand, its great for air guitar! LOL

[Dogstar]

hey and besides i'm sure you can still rock with a walking stick in hand, its great for air guitar! LOL

LMMFAO!!!! I needed a good laugh!!!!! Seriously, though, thanks for the kind words!

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LMMFAO!!!! I needed a good laugh!!!!! Seriously, though, thanks for the kind words!

thats cool even if no-one besides us creed nerds see it at least it helps you out, its great therapy. seriously those lyrics are fantastic keep it up!

[Dogstar]

Hehehe, yes, indeed, it is good therapy! And it's fun. It gives my brain a worthy exercise :D.

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Hehehe, yes, indeed, it is good therapy! And it's fun. It gives my brain a worthy exercise :D.

once again i'll bring up Eddie Vedder but he has said you can either spend hundreds on therapy or for only a few dollars buy yourself some canvases, some paint and the like for next to nothing and it will last you a year or so. same principle here!