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Torn Signs
12-18-2003, 06:04 PM
The world is sterile,
It doesn't move,
Sit lost and confused,
Wondering why time moves as it does,
Why you are here and I am here,
Why leaves change color in the Fall,
Why seasons change and children bawl,
Why there is no progression from now and when,
Why History is exciting but routines are not,
Why anxiety takes over and worry reigns,
Why trust can't be achieved and fear remains,
Why the heart beats too fast for the mind to control,
Why the future is fear's foe and the past is knowledge's companion,
Why fear is even discussed when one is to fear only one entity?

Then I know, I don't worry, breathe, become serene.
Shadows will only fall if a soul lets them, if the soul lets the spirit and strength of belief fade. One can wither to ashes and suffer weakness and pain if one does not find there rebound.

The world is sterile,
It doesn't move,
I sit seeing the past, knowledge my companion,
Looking onto the future, fighting fear and worry.
Looking up and trusting while also learning to fear the entity.
Fight the confusion, stop pondering, rise over the darkness--> Light is too valuable, love is a need, dreaded pain befalls lost souls,
---> Live life to it's fullest for humans are only mortal.

creedsister
12-18-2003, 06:26 PM
:) Yeap kim i can really relate to alot of those things,,Good words Good poem,

Dogstar
12-18-2003, 09:20 PM
Nice job, Torn signs!

Aimee
12-20-2003, 05:22 PM
Very deep...

creedsister
12-20-2003, 07:19 PM
Very deep... i thought so anyways :)

Torn Signs
12-20-2003, 08:00 PM
thanks, maybe one more dark then it may be a good idea to get into something else ;)

creedsister
12-20-2003, 08:04 PM
ok

MrSeeker
12-21-2003, 03:03 AM
Very good as usual Kim!!! :D

Creed_Defaultgirl
12-21-2003, 04:46 PM
Very good as usual Kim!!! :D
That's great, I like unusual. It gets me interested.