Deep Inside

[mushroomy2k]

I never thought i would ever know or feel the presence
of the power of saddness Deep inside which never subsides.
I feel like a mole in a hole underground,slow,in darkness
the cold inside never subsides.
lost is the power of happiness and spirit.
in the morning when i wake my spirit screams why didnt
you dissapate love what you have before its to late.

[creedsister]

yeap i can relate to all that stuff,,cant seem to get away from it,,but i dont think its ever to late,,by the way killer poem,,,

[Sheila63]

Great poem, mushroomy2k. :D I can definitely relate.

[MrSeeker]

Yea, its good :D

[PaulMcCoygirl]

Wow, I can definitely relate to that! Great poem by the way! :)

[mushroomy2k]

thanks everyone i tried not as good as all of yours but gave it a shot.

[creedsister]

thanks everyone i tried not as good as all of yours but gave it a shot. well i liked reading theme just like anybody else,s,,and they kinda touched me too,,keep em coming,,peace

[SCOTTSMYMAN]

It was as good! Great poem. Keep posting!

[Creed_Defaultgirl]

It was great! What are you talking about you just gave it a shot? I liked it!

[Aimee]

Me too! Especially this part...
in the morning when i wake my spirit screams