Sweet Nothing

[Dogstar]

Held your hand out strong to beg
Should have run away instead
Unflinching need to drive the stake
So deep inside my will to break

Snaked your way in under my skin
Should have known I couldn’t win
Smile beguiled with charm you plied
Laughed inside as you watched me slide

Glad to see you’re whole again
Nice that you don’t fret within
Before you think you have it made
Guess again, because you haven’t paid

Give in I did to mournful eyes
Should have heeded nagging whys
Wanting passive you let me twist
Made it hard for me to resist

Empty rooms full of old dreams
Silence broken by fitful screams
Rue the day you darkened my door
For now I know too well the score

Glad to see you’re whole again
Nice that you don’t fret within
Before you think you have it made
Guess again, because you haven’t paid

[MrSeeker]

That is amazing!!! wow,totally awesome!!!

[creedsister]

yea i like,,guess again because you havent paid

[creedsister]

yea i like,,guess again because you havent paid

[mushroomy2k]

really awsome Dogstar

[TeriB19]

Kerri, IMO, that is your best yet. Who among us hasn't felt that?? That really was outstanding!!

[Dogstar]

Thanks, you guys. I'm glad everyone's enjoying them!

[SCOTTSMYMAN]

:thud: Have to go with Teri and say it's your best yet! I love it! I know someone that poem would fit with too! Keep'em coming Kerri! ;)



AWESOME!!!

[PaulMcCoygirl]

I don't know about you guys, but I can relate to that. Excellent poem!