My Poem "drop Those Tears"

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the foundations of my life have split
the atom in two
how could they do it to you?
drop those tears
gotta get out
of my big dismal
and touch the sky

you've got to forget
those tears cause
they only reach the ground
you've got to
touch the sky

all around you
there are faceless men
forgetten their creator
but you saved me
from slipping off the edge
my burden lifted
now i can touch the sky

you can't use the failings of others
as justification for
your walk in the mud
drop those tears
forget those tears

[Dogstar]

Hide, that is beautiful! Thanks for sharing!

[creedsister]

How could?,,All thou a mother may forget her suckling baby and fathers go estray...to serve god or the world HE NEVER FOREGETS...Being mindful of thy tears that i may be filled with joy...for he as stored tears in a bottle..and turn theme to oill...after the rain comes the sun,,,,,remember the days of playing out in the rain....drink of this water and ye shall never thirst again....we have enter as children....child like faith has kept us....what makes us grown ups anyway...the way of traditon....the way of man the way of socitey...so were born again....peace...nic poem

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no worries i'm aiming for Stappy's job! LOL although if you ask my housemates his job as lead singer is safe! LOL

[creedsister]

Really...Cute....there....Hide.....LOL

[JulieCitySlicker]

That was really good hide :)

[Siana]

very nice