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Aimee
10-14-2003, 12:44 PM
By: Amy Aumick 2003

Lying on this dusty floor,
Peeking through the cracking light
It's not dawn and it's not death,
It's just another night.
I don't want to wait
Like I did before
Cause while you shut it slowly,
I am beating on your door.
Every time I look at you,
A torment creeps into me
Because every time you look at me,
I wonder if you ever knew me.
No the world can't say
That I am oh-so-wrong.
So the world can spin so fast,
And still I sing this song.
While the years fly by,
As my time gets small,
I am blind. I don't try.
I want you, no I want it all.
Pretend, false pretense
Love, hope, lust...
Our pride must let us go
Before we turn to dust.
Lying on this dusty floor,
Peeking through the cracking light
It's not dawn and it's not death,
It's just another night.

Siana
10-14-2003, 04:24 PM
nice

SCOTTSMYMAN
10-15-2003, 08:37 AM
AWESOME!!! I love it Amy!

TeriB19
10-15-2003, 10:06 AM
Fantastic!! :clap::clap::clap:

whitebird
10-26-2003, 01:41 PM
That is beautifully worded sadness. It touches the soul with it's depth.

whitebird

Dogstar
10-28-2003, 02:32 AM
Wow, Aimee...nicely done.

mushroomy2k
10-28-2003, 09:43 AM
that is really awsome aimee keep up the good work.
yall have a awsome day. :P

mushroomy2k
10-28-2003, 09:45 AM
:) how do you errase a post