"Brokeness"

[MrSeeker]

Here is another song i wrote:

"Brokeness is emptyness and emptyness is filling me
Breathe in then out,You know without a doubt that im full of doubt
Just cast it out,get rid of this infective disease that blinds me
Please,im begging You,im on my knees!
The emptyness is blinding me so i cant see,but i can still feel and
i can feel Your real,i can feel You within every bone in my body,i can feel You,i know Your there,but do You really care?

Brokeness is emptyness and emptyness is filling them
I hope and pray everyday You change the hearts of those blind men and every day i know i tend to curve and bend,but i'll keep my eyes on You,my prize despite all their meaning-less lives
(guitar interlude)
Brokeness is emptyness and emptyness is meaning-less as long as we keep our eyes on You,our prize,we know we will never die,by Your side we will forever fly,
Oh,how that brings tears to my eyes"


Hope ya like it. I just came up with the last part that goes "Oh,how that brings tears to my eyes",that wasnt part of the song,it just popped into my head so i thought i would end it like that. so yea, tell me if ya love it,hate it,think its ok,whatever,just tell me what ya think. bye,hope you liked it.
:D

[ZION1010]

Its Pretty Good Kinda Puts In Mind of Something.......I Liked It tho mrseeker....First Do The Will god And....then His Promises shall Be Given....Ye Thats What It Puts In mind Of.....I think Thats Somewere In Hew....And Romans.....I Liked It God Bless Ps....Thanks For Praying For Me He Heard my Brother..........

[MrSeeker]

Im glad ya liked it.
Your welcome man : )

[ZION1010]

Originally posted by MrSeeker
Im glad ya liked it.
Your welcome man : ) I Really Liked And Thanks Again

[MrSeeker]

Cool,no prob.
God bless ya bro ; )

[ZION1010]

Whatcha Up To

[Torn Signs]

i figured u two ended up buds, and yah that was very nice u got talent...i'm too timid to put stuff I've done on here

[ZION1010]

Aw That So Sweet Your So timid...I dont Care what i Post Nobody Gets it Anyway....They Like It Better At The What Our You Wearing Now Thread.....

[ZION1010]

Ps SUFFER SATAN>>>>>>>>>>>>>>HE WILL I PROMISE

[Torn Signs]

i know he will...i know the end...pretty well...and thnks for sayin' I'm sweet for bein' timid, I just don't need everyone to know all my personal thoughts.

[MrSeeker]

Yea, some of the stuff i write is really personel, i dont care,we're not here to judge, just give love is all.
Anywayz im not up to much, if ya guys(girls) want ta chat,just PM me, im happy to hear from ya : )
Thanks for the love ya'll ; )

[ZION1010]

Ya Know I Know It... There Torn just How Personal you Our Thanks For Trusting Me And Beliving In me.......................Blessed Will You Be

[ZION1010]

Originally posted by MrSeeker
Yea, some of the stuff i write is really personel, i dont care,we're not here to judge, just give love is all.
Anywayz im not up to much, if ya guys(girls) want ta chat,just PM me, im happy to hear from ya : )
Thanks for the love ya'll ; ) Your Welcome Mrseeker im out A Here.........Nite all........Peace Be With Ya

[MrSeeker]

PM me so we can find out more about eachother.

[MrSeeker]

Night bro ; )

[Torn Signs]

just how personal? hm...you'd have to go to my website to read it...lol...;)

[MrSeeker]

Whats your site? You can PM it to me,if you dony want everyone else to see it

[ZION1010]

Originally posted by Torn Signs
just how personal? hm...you'd have to go to my website to read it...lol...;) I Got It Thanks Torn

[MrSeeker]

Got it too,pretty good stuff.

[MrSeeker]

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