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MrSeeker
08-30-2003, 03:14 PM
"Save me from myself (Im everything i despise)
Save me from myself (I cant take all my lies)
Break me! (I need to be broken)
Break me! (shatter me to pieces)
Take me! (do what you will with my lifeless body)
Take me! (I cant take the pain)
Take away the chanes that bind me (set me free!)
My skin is burning and Im trying to kill the pain,
Wash away my stains of blood from the cutting.
Somtimes the pain hurts so much that i try to kill it by taking the knife to bone, I feel so alone down here, all i need is someone to talk to,but the only one i can talk to is You,but it seems that You cant hear me or maybe Your just ignoring me,
so i guess i'll go on finding ways to numb my pain.
(guitar interlude)
One day i know it will be too late and i'll be dead in a ditch with a knife in my wrist,just because i didnt have someone to talk to.
I tried to drown my sorrows in alcohol and drugs,but it just left me the same,it couldnt take away my pain; i cant wash away my scars so now i turn to You,i guess for now You will have to do, i want to believe everything You say is true, You say You love me and i think i love You too
(bridge)
(the blood,it flows; the scars,they show; its sad,i know) (X2)
I just cant stop cutting to stop my feelings of being alone
I cant take this, i want to die!!!!!!!!
*whisper* all i needed was someone to talk to
(guitar interlude)
I know millions feel this way and i curse the day You took her away (she took her life with a knife) All she needed was someone to talk to and tell her she was loved,but no, she had to die alone and now she will never make it Home.
(Remember your not alone,your never alone)"


What ya think? Be honest,please.
I am not singing the first part, the first part is being sung by a female, the part where it says "i know millions feel this way" is where i start singing,i also sing the parts in these ( )
So yea. :D
Note: i am sorry if this sounds anything like Evanescence, i just kinda realized it sounds kinda like them now,but i in no way tried to make it that way, it kinda sounds like them by accident,i wrote it and then realized it sounds like them so again,im sorry if it does.

ZION1010
08-30-2003, 06:29 PM
I liked it ......It was killer....... Reminds Me Of Me At one time.........Pray Jesus Name Im Not Like That Anymore........

ZION1010
08-30-2003, 06:30 PM
TYPO sorry thats just me praise

MrSeeker
08-31-2003, 11:07 PM
Thanks,so you really liked it?

ZION1010
08-31-2003, 11:19 PM
Yea I Never Say anything i Dont mean......Kay......I liked it...

ZION1010
08-31-2003, 11:31 PM
Whtcha....been...up...to...by...the...way there...mrseeker

MrSeeker
09-01-2003, 02:03 PM
(ZION1010, check your pm's)

ZION1010
09-01-2003, 05:49 PM
I Opend It...I Forget To From....Time To Time.....Check your...Email....please...Mrseeker

MrSeeker
09-07-2003, 12:59 AM
I did,hehe

ZION1010
09-07-2003, 12:28 PM
okay

paulosousa6
09-11-2003, 12:13 PM
hey it's great!!!!!!!!!!! WHY don't u add the crd???????
Bye...congratulations!!!!!!!

ZION1010
09-12-2003, 12:16 AM
Take this Pain Away.....Because I Cant Make It Not One more Day....Free Me From This pain...Let me see a Light before i Dye Free me From My tears I Know Now That No one hears Free me From Fears Free Me From the Gates That Cant Wait Too Let Me In...Got open Invitation To Hell Please Free Me From This Fate Oh Please Dont Let It Be To Late....No Ones Hearing me how Could This be youve Pushed My Cry A side Left Me Here To Dye,,,,Oh Why must death Target And desire Me...Why Wont It Shut Its Gates For Me It just cant Wait....Please someone tell me its not too late...Ps Some one did

ZION1010
09-12-2003, 12:19 AM
another not so me anymore poem,,,,it was written....Dec 20 1999

MrSeeker
09-12-2003, 02:59 AM
Thanks,Im glad ya liked it. What is the crd?
Nice poem ZION : )

ZION1010
09-12-2003, 10:33 AM
i was wondering thing about the cdr

ZION1010
09-12-2003, 10:51 AM
Thanks Glad You Liked It,,,,Yours Put Me In Mind Of myself....So much....

MrSeeker
09-13-2003, 02:13 AM
Is that a good or bad thing?

ZION1010
09-13-2003, 10:07 AM
wELL MR SEEKER,,,ITS LIKE THIS MY KEYS OUR STUCK BY THE WAY....BACK TO THE POINT...WHEN I READ YOUR STUFF...ITS TAKES ME BACK TO A WORLD OF DARKNESS WITHOUT LIFE...BUT...WHEN I READ IT IM PRASING GOD ALL THE TIME THAT IM NOT LIKE THAT ANYMORE....YA KNOW..ITS LIKE WHEN I READ THEME I CAN HERE THE LORDS VOICE TELLING ME...LOOK WERE...I....HAVE...BROUGHT YOU FROM I DELIVERD YOU FROM DEATHS DOOR..SO ITS A GREAT THING MRSEEKER.......WEVE SEEN OUR SHARE OF UPS N DOWNS HOW QUICKLY LIFE CAN TURN AROUND IN A INSTANT....

MrSeeker
09-14-2003, 02:30 AM
Thats cool.
I wanted the song to have a light at the end of the tunnel kinda feel,does it have that kind of feel to it?

ZION1010
09-14-2003, 11:03 AM
Yea Mrseeker,,,It Does have that Feel...I picked Up On It Rite Away...But Some wont get it rite Away.....This Agony Scene....Seems Like There Singing About Me Too Its Funny...How A song Or A Video....Can Just Point Rite At You...I Belive God Uses Music To Reach You When He Cant...B/C Sometimes Your Just Having Your Own Pity Party And Nobody Else Is Invited....And The Only One That cant Set you Free By Reasons youve Blocked Him Out.......Umm... Im On A Roll Again Arent I.....so Im Going Shut up For Now............

MrSeeker
09-14-2003, 05:07 PM
Yea, thats good. So you checked out The Agony Scene? What did ya think of them?

ZION1010
09-14-2003, 06:58 PM
I Liked Theme....I Like Anything I Can Relate Too ESP.....When Its Heavy.....Play Skifulliy With A Loud Noise....Pslam.....

MrSeeker
09-14-2003, 09:18 PM
Yup. How about The Death Campaign? You listen to them?

ZION1010
09-15-2003, 12:07 AM
No i didnt but i will when i get some me time...promise...

MrSeeker
09-15-2003, 01:05 AM
Yea, well their a really good band : )

ZION1010
09-15-2003, 11:23 AM
Originally posted by MrSeeker
Yea, well their a really good band : ) I Tryed To Open The Site And Couldnt Find Theme...Help

MrSeeker
09-15-2003, 09:13 PM
Ummm,it takes awhile to load the site, if you cant get it, you can go to MP3.com and their song is called "The Knife", you can listen to the song there.

ZION1010
09-15-2003, 10:39 PM
Allright I Will Try It.........k

MrSeeker
10-11-2003, 02:40 PM
ZION1010,
where the heck did you go?!?!?!?

creedsister
11-02-2003, 10:50 AM
Im right Here mrseeker...i think i know what you were thinking here at this time.......Jesus christ saved me once and placed me on a rock were i can not be moved....hay thats another good song by a band called petra ...iam on the rock...ever heard it....its little more on the pop metal side...but i like a lot of their songs....PEACE

MrSeeker
11-08-2003, 04:36 PM
HAHAHA, sorry i didnt reply to this,i didnt see it.
I wrote that because you were gone for a long time and i was wondering where you went. no,i havent heard that song,well,i dont think i have...o_0

creedsister
11-08-2003, 11:15 PM
its ok,,,but you thought i was gone for sure,,,i liked the song...diffrent,,from,,,the rest,,peace

creedsister
11-13-2003, 01:28 AM
this was pretty funny

Torn Signs
11-26-2003, 12:49 AM
great job w/ it. You obviously understand what you are writing about and it makes it all that much more better. Keep throwing out the awesome work.

MrSeeker
11-26-2003, 01:04 AM
Your too kind Kim. Thank you :-)