Wiseman or a Fool

[GarrisonMC]

I can be that wise man
Sitting on a hill
Meditating
Knowing just how you feel

Or I could be that fool
Standing in the rain
Not knowing
Even my own pain

Ch.
Am I wise
Or just a fool
Am I in disguise
Or just acting fool
Maybe just for fun
I'll touch the sun
Or to be cute
I'll try to substitute

Vs.2
I can be that king
Sitting on his throne
Feeling alive
But mostly alone

And I can be the one
Who is always there
With alot to learn
And nothing to share

Rpt. Ch

(rpt five times)
I'm a wise man
No I'm a fool

Rpt Ch

[CollectiveSoul]

very nicely done. very very very good. I haven't seen stuff liek that in awhile. thanks Garrison

[PaulMcCoygirl]

That's cool!You're an awesome writer! :jam:

[Higher_Desire]

That's a really nice poem. :)


H-D

[Ann Allusion]

cool lyrics...enjoyed them...thanks for sharing

peace

[HESTLA'S HONEY]

Hi,

This is a very well written piece. It flows well and the imagery is brilliant!! Very nice!!!

[Aimee]

Yes, what they said. Welcome to the BB. I'd like to see more of your stuff.
PS ANN ALLUSION - that's a cool effing name!!!