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Sam16
06-13-2003, 11:15 PM
I put alot of feeling into this one and hope you guys enjoy it.


To Live With You

Wanting to believe my soul can for a moment be free
But reminded of mistakes that still are plaguing me
Making me feel important she takes my hand
It seems to be easer with two to stand
But the thoughts that still plague me make me grow old
Wanting to embrace this but I remember the last time I was bold
I regret my birth for those two things that haunt me inside
I opened my soul for the sin I now hate to abide
The sins that still sting inside of my heart
I should have walked the right path from the very start
But tears fill my eyes because I know it’s to late
Still I refuse to except this as fate
I know I can change but fear to express
Thinking that others will think of me as less
I cry for your help but you don’t seem to hear
I feel you are with me but in these things aren’t near
Please take this pain and make it go away
Just let me feel normal if just for a day
These things I beg of you to do just for me
And if you don’t want me to feel then just help me to see
Help me see what it is that you want me to do
I just want to live right and to please only you
But these scars that haunt me will always keep us apart
I know they tell me your with me but I sometimes feel that you aren’t
But believing so long and calling so loud
Just hoping soon to be taken above the clouds
To live with you in all that is good
And being so close like I know that we should

JulieCitySlicker
06-13-2003, 11:20 PM
That was very good Sam:P I love reading your poems:)

Wylde-Tremonti
06-14-2003, 12:28 AM
RockOn DUDE!

creedgirl99
06-18-2003, 02:46 PM
Very good job!!!

StappsSaviour
06-18-2003, 08:20 PM
yea its real kool dude

PaulMcCoygirl
06-29-2003, 12:19 AM
Very nice!! :)