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Sam16
05-19-2003, 11:44 PM
Another darker one :crying:

Seeking Peace

A clouded sky begins to darkens my way
Lightning strikes above no longer can I stay
I Listen for directions but thunder fills my ears
I though I felt rain but it was only my tears
Running from this place but were can I go
The comfort I had was all just a show
But I see a brake in the blinding storm
I don’t know if I can make it for my soul is torn
It’s hail beat my heart far to long
My spirit fading but still I prolong
I hope I find some way out
For inside my heart is so full of doubt
Refusing to fail never will I cease
For the brake is still there and in it is peace

JulieCitySlicker
05-20-2003, 12:14 PM
That was very good Sam:angel:

goddess_bb
05-20-2003, 12:51 PM
Lovely as always..but I don't understand what the "brake" is...

Sam16
05-20-2003, 07:17 PM
The brake is something different for everyone. It could be being with your family at the end of a long day, being with someone you care about, God etc.

goddess_bb
05-21-2003, 12:29 AM
Okay..wow I have never heard that word used in that context before..thanks..always lookin for new words...
So is it getting less scary yet posting??

Sam16
05-21-2003, 02:30 PM
yeah, I really care less and less what others think because this is just a way for me to express myself.

goddess_bb
05-21-2003, 04:19 PM
Good for you, Sam..that is really a big step..