-Confusion-

[tru2mine]

i wrote this about a year ago and for some reason i feel like sharing.


I stand alone
confined to this same old road
trapped in confusion
my mind dont wanna play, i fold
I feel im losin,
my grasp on realitys cold
desperation how do i crawl up out of this hole,
My life is fadin,
the path that i have walked is thin,
no room for error,
bad decisions have sparked my sin,
where do i go from here, im lost
theres nobody to help,
its me against the world fightin as im burning in hell,
or so it seems , is this dreams or is all of it real
watch me as i sleep, when i wake is all of it healed


There it is, let me know what ya think.

[JulieCitySlicker]

That was really good;) I have felt the same feelings before. I really enjoyed reading your poem:angel:

[tru2mine]

thanx

[JulieCitySlicker]

Your Welcome:P :angel:

[Siana]

i like that poem :)

[Ivan_Creed]

Very interesting... there is truth in your poem!!

[whitebird]

It seems like this poem was written when there was great difficulty in your life. The darkness is expressed thru your words. Great sadness sometimes creates very spiritual and creative flows in our lives. Thank for sharing your poem.