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JulieCitySlicker
03-06-2003, 10:50 PM
This one is called Sometimes The Good Die Young:(

Sometimes the good die young,its sad but its true. When we never find answers, when we never understand. The blame gets put on you. Some start to cry and some get mad and that is when good people turn bad. As we shake our fists toward heaven and ask God Don't you even care? Even though we all know that He is always there.

Sometimes the good die young, its sad but its trueWhen we pray for one more heartbeat and one more breath of air. Sometimes the real comfortis knowing that they are safe up there with you.

JulieCitySlicker
03-07-2003, 02:37 PM
See...I told ya my poems were sad:(

Siana
03-11-2003, 04:56 AM
sad but moving

Agent D
03-11-2003, 07:04 PM
Thought provoking. I liked it!

JulieCitySlicker
03-11-2003, 11:49 PM
Thanks:P

creedgirl99
03-12-2003, 06:03 PM
That was good...

whitebird
03-26-2003, 04:44 PM
There is alot of truth in your poem, and much sadness.
It is also very beautiful, thank you.

JulieCitySlicker
03-26-2003, 11:07 PM
:P

Sheila63
04-09-2003, 08:07 PM
I agree with whitebird. Your poem states the truth and is beautiful.:)

JulieCitySlicker
04-09-2003, 11:16 PM
Thanks Sheila:P

Sheila63
04-10-2003, 08:19 PM
Your welcome!:D

SmEeKy
04-15-2003, 04:17 PM
Good poem Julie! keep writing :-)

SmEeKy
04-15-2003, 04:20 PM
I'm new to this so don't make fun of me because it only saids one post lol

JulieCitySlicker
04-15-2003, 05:03 PM
Originally posted by SmEeKy
I'm new to this so don't make fun of me because it only saids one post lol Hi SmEeky:angel: Welcome to the board:dancing: :dancing: I hope you like it here...there are a lot of great people here! Thanks for the poem to:bounce:

Sheila63
04-15-2003, 06:47 PM
Welcome to the board, SmEeKy!!! Hope you enjoy your time here!!:newbie: :thewave:

goddess_bb
05-02-2003, 12:29 AM
Wow..Julie that is lovely..just found it...

JulieCitySlicker
05-02-2003, 02:20 PM
Thanks Goddess:P