Sam16
02-28-2003, 01:24 PM
I wrote this poem and now need a name for it, it's one of the imprtant one's so i could use your sugjestions, thanks
no title
My brothers came calling to me today
Why must they all be treated this way
They are judged for what will someday fade away
But what’s inside the spirit and soul will always stay
And now my sister cry’s on my shoulder
Pray I don’t find the one who hurt her
She tells of the pain she was dealt
The pain I wish instead I would have felt
The one thing I know is ill always be here
To love those who hurt and to dry their every tear
no title
My brothers came calling to me today
Why must they all be treated this way
They are judged for what will someday fade away
But what’s inside the spirit and soul will always stay
And now my sister cry’s on my shoulder
Pray I don’t find the one who hurt her
She tells of the pain she was dealt
The pain I wish instead I would have felt
The one thing I know is ill always be here
To love those who hurt and to dry their every tear