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Sam16
02-24-2003, 12:11 AM
just feeling a little low so i wrote you guys some poems (Helps me feel a little beter ;)


Where to go

The maze ahead is harsh and there are many ways to turn
I wish I knew the way for my souls begun to yern
Time passes quickly and my youth begins to fade
I wish I could escape the prison we have made
I see others stumble and fall along the way
They cry to nothing and it hears nothing that they say
I feel sorrow for there cry’s wont last another day
They crying will soon sees and there life will fade away
And well all begin to wish we had picked another way





Broken dreams

Dreams burning in my mind
Of a peace I cannot find
A peace that is hole and alone is mine
Iv waited long and feel there’s no more time
Is anyone there who can show me the way
Give their love and my soul a place to stay
Show me the sun if even only a ray
My heart telling me no ones there
Hope sliding further into nowhere
Cant someone show me they care?

SCOTTSMYMAN
02-24-2003, 08:36 PM
Thanks having a bad day and they helped me feel a little bit better too. Nice work.
:dancing: :dancing:

Siana
02-26-2003, 07:57 AM
hope you're better today.good work