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creedfaner
10-09-2002, 11:41 PM
I wrote this song while i was in the middle of the the three day process of breaking up with my ex. Enjoy!

I Tried
We just had the biggest fight now,
What did I do now?
This is just misunderstanding,
Dont you see that?
The why oh why's!
Is this hell I am facing...

I tried to be perfect in His eyes for you,
I tried to be perfect for you,
I tried to be everything for you,
I did everything for you,
I stayed alive for you
I tried to live to be the perfect.
I failed once again...
I failed you, I failed myself.

What did I do wrong?
I am this close to losing you,
And I think I'm scared,
I am this close to losing you again,
Its all closing in on me one more time.

I tried to be perfect in His eyes for you,
I tried to be perfect for you,
I tried to be everything for you,
I did everything for you,
I stayed alive for you
I tried to live to be the perfect.
I failed once again...
I failed you, I failed myself.

I tried to be your everything,
I hoped to save you everything unclean.
I failed at what i set my goal as.
I failed you, I failed myself again.

What did I do wrong?
Tell me please,
What started this.
I think you're going to leave me,
I know you're going to leave me.
The why oh why's.

I tried to be your superman,
I tried to be perfect,
I tried to be your everything,
I tried to love you,
I tried to care for your needs.
But it has all fallen apert now.
It is all gone away.
The why oh why's.

So let me remind you before i go...
I gave you the world,
And in return,
I got a grain of sand.

So now in our weeps,
I will leave you.
I will leave you.
I will leave you.
I will leave you

what do you think?

Siana
10-11-2002, 07:59 AM
it's nice :)

Lady Valkyrie
10-11-2002, 09:13 AM
That song descibed me when I left my second husband who is an alcoholic. I liked the song by the way.

Siana
10-11-2002, 10:37 AM
i'm sorry to hear that about your husband :(

Lady Valkyrie
10-14-2002, 08:46 PM
Originally posted by Siana
i'm sorry to hear that about your husband :(

Thank you... however, I am so over him. He truely needs help...and needs someone to love but my kids deserve better. I will always love him as a person... but I am no longer "in love" with him. But thank you anyways, hon. :)

Siana
10-17-2002, 09:09 AM
no need to thank me :)

PaulMcCoygirl
11-16-2002, 01:49 AM
Very nice!