-Importance-

[tru2mine]

Ok bare with me, this is my first time ever sharing anything I wrote and I'd appreciate some honest feedback. Be brutal if you must.


Wake up Sean,
Dont let this kick you in the face,
this world and this life you lead,
dont let it go to waste,
Do the things you dont want to,
to get the things that you need,
Dont allow yourself to be pressured,
into beliefs you dont believe,
Stay humble and be confident,
take risks when you can,
make your family proud,
but dont live life just for them,
Have fun and always smile,
make sure you have your friends,
and whatever it takes to make it,
keep reaching until the end
no matter what they tell you,
your happiness is your key,
whatever it is that brings you joy,
hold it close and be free,
so I call to you wit desperate plee's
before your time is gone,
take hold of what I tell you,
for this is your heart, Sincerely Sean

[Redeemer]

Heyyyy, not bad! I'm feelin' it, I'm feelin' it...:D

[Marty]

I like it, though it'd be better if I could hear the music behind it. That could be sung slowly, fast, loud or medium loud or whatever. :)
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[creedgirl99]

That was awesome!