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nagpo
05-21-2010, 07:45 PM
Through the garden now
I see a rose entwined
The thorns are piercing stone

My heart is falling now
To my gut it goes

I don't want this
I know I need this love

Let it take all that I am
And have it fly away
Fly away

All this time
I've been searching for a rhyme

All I've found is mudded grass
My dreams are headed for a crash

Let it take all that I am
And have it fly away...away
fly away...oh no

Through this time
I've been lost in this life of mine

So take all that I am
And make it something
Worthwhile...oh no
This legacy's all yours

TrulyAmazing
05-21-2010, 11:28 PM
i like the title ...through this time i,ve been lost in this life of mine so take all that i,am and make it something worthwhile...oh no this legacy all yours you should be proud of it indeed it was well written from a plane that knows no boundries on a way one trip to reviving and refreshing the utter parts of the sea, well written nagpo ....... :jam:

nagpo
05-22-2010, 12:06 AM
Thank you

TrulyAmazing
05-22-2010, 03:33 PM
Thank you
your welcome as always nagpo good stuff