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Carly
09-30-2009, 05:50 PM
me...
longing for the bright white roses
me...
dreaming of a free innocence
I can't promise a day
of what I desire or say

me...
surrounded by dust that stains the soul
me...
a sinner sometimes out of controle
can't take the hand of Jesus
'cause there's so much more

me...
this time I'm torn apart by myself
me...
can't I just find the key !!!
while witches fly on my sky
these days they have a car

you...
just acccasionedly stop by
to tell me a few of your perfect life
yes that's you
you will do

I loved the voices in my head
they wouldn't leave me by myself
the inner side of cosmos
so fascinating
leaves funny answers
when I start guessing

maybe that's just what I'll do
put on my dipers and choose the blue
but there's something so green in me
that all the splendor didn't matter
a little girl who loved a little rabbit
still knows all I know

TrulyAmazing
10-02-2009, 08:35 AM
that was very well written indeed good job good to see our poets sharing their stuff

Carly
10-02-2009, 11:59 AM
Thanks!

TrulyAmazing
10-02-2009, 09:04 PM
your welcome