adparaiki
10-24-2008, 04:54 AM
Hi. I am the guitarist and singer in my band and just would really like to have opinions of some lyrics I have written. Note: They are not all complete yet
Someone Else. (c) Adam Parker 24/10/08
Verse 1:
Looking into the mirror I see this unfamiliar face
Starring back at me, have I changed, is this me
Pre-Chorus
If I could take back what Ive done wrong
If All my demons would be gone.
Chorus
I will feel free, I will belong Here
Someone Else I wont be,
This Stranger staring back at me.
Verse 2:
Looking into this mirros I see that I am this stranger
Starring back at me, I have changed, this is me
Room to Breathe (c) Adam Parker 24/10/08
Verse 1:
Your eyes follow me ,accross the room, I can't breathe
You're watching at my every move, you're smothering me
Judging, watching, waiting, ready to control
Do you think i've no mind of my own.
Chrous:
You need to let me go,
Because I need room to Breathe
And i'll make up my own mind
I'll make my own wrongs and rights
Bridge:
All I ever wanted is you to believe in me
I need room to breathe
Someone Else. (c) Adam Parker 24/10/08
Verse 1:
Looking into the mirror I see this unfamiliar face
Starring back at me, have I changed, is this me
Pre-Chorus
If I could take back what Ive done wrong
If All my demons would be gone.
Chorus
I will feel free, I will belong Here
Someone Else I wont be,
This Stranger staring back at me.
Verse 2:
Looking into this mirros I see that I am this stranger
Starring back at me, I have changed, this is me
Room to Breathe (c) Adam Parker 24/10/08
Verse 1:
Your eyes follow me ,accross the room, I can't breathe
You're watching at my every move, you're smothering me
Judging, watching, waiting, ready to control
Do you think i've no mind of my own.
Chrous:
You need to let me go,
Because I need room to Breathe
And i'll make up my own mind
I'll make my own wrongs and rights
Bridge:
All I ever wanted is you to believe in me
I need room to breathe