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inside_us_all04
09-19-2008, 10:34 PM
Weve been friends for what
long as i can remember
dont know why it ends this way
but it comes to me as a suprise
the bitterness you must have for me
after all ive done for you
and all youve done in the past for me
comes as a big suprise

i thought you were my friend my confondont
someone i could turn to n youd keep my words in private
but i guess not i guess fuckin not

i must have wronged you somehow
cuz ive thought bout it time n time again
gone thru my memory as best as i can
and i cant think of one damn thing
is it so bad me ordering you things
taking you to shows lettin you have some fun
cuz you spend most of the day in pain

i thought you were my friend my confondont
someone i could turn to n youd keep my words in private
but i guess not i guess fuckin not

and just thought it would be nice for me to
give you something and all youve given me
guess so cuz what you told my mom
you didnt even have the fuckin deceny or respect
to tell me to my face or to tell me your woried
cuz least thought you woulda told me instead of
someone else but i didnt even get that from you
and for your wife to but her nose in angers me
cuz it wasnt her place its u n i who were friends
but gee now i know youve been telling her things bout
our conversations when you told me you wouldnt

i thought you were my friend my confondont
someone i could turn to n youd keep my words in private
but i guess not i guess fuckin not

really hurts to say goodbye cuz i thought you were my friend
i thought you were a trusted one i put my trust in you
and this is the way you repay me so lite a match burn it down

TrulyAmazing
09-21-2008, 01:01 PM
:jam: :jam: anger potery Awsome job As always :)

nagpo
09-28-2008, 09:05 PM
i like it. nice rhyming scheme.

TrulyAmazing
09-28-2008, 10:04 PM
i,ve got new stuff thats a must post but i,ve gotta go back and edited it all the entire thing