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metalchris25
07-28-2008, 05:09 AM
Visited by a past

that I never understood

brings memories flooding back

Id cut them off if I could


these four walls here remind me

of how I never stood a chance

faded pictures in broken frames

stop me where I stand


Every brand new thought of you

brings the same old tears

Soon theyll flood this empty house

and help soak in my fears


If I had known it wasnt in me,

I would have never said forever

If only I had known myself

you wouldnt have felt love sever


I cant stop blaming you

though I know its all my fault

you should have known the me that died inside

you knew every other thought after all

TrulyAmazing
07-31-2008, 10:11 PM
Reminds Me Of Really Really Really Great Classic smooth groovy i like it HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Bad Title Of Course but great lines And verses mabey you saw this piece as same as i did all the titles you could work with on this one Have more in likely already been taken my choice would be would be to shoot with like one of those alternative titles that would really work for this piece Like sand storm walls but either way awsome piece man :jam:

metalchris25
08-01-2008, 01:43 AM
I dont really like this one, i was just bored. Thanks for the kind words though.

TrulyAmazing
08-03-2008, 05:45 PM
I dont really like this one, i was just bored. Thanks for the kind words though.
your welcome i liked it though really good piece of boring stuff