View Full Version : first verse of our new song (unfinished and untitled so far)
metalchris25
06-26-2008, 06:01 PM
First verse of new song:
i could tell you that I love myself
but I know that its not true
A buried faith inside cant help
to hide contempt for you
the empty shell you left behind
and things we left unsaid
haunt my sleep till I cant find
my way out of my head
seek out destroyed memories
images fractured bring me to my knees
I cry out to you bleeding out my soul
No one answers, IVE FINALLY LOST CONTROL
(chorus)
nagpo
06-26-2008, 08:27 PM
that's pretty good man. post the rest
metalchris25
06-27-2008, 01:21 AM
I will send the rest to any regulars to this site willing to give their email address. Legally I am not allowed to give this song away, but I accept any email as payment. cst-2238152199. Please respect my privacy and do not send it outside this site.I will have cd's and tabs available in 2 months. these songs are in production, so please please please dont share the files with anyone. I just want feedback from yall. Thanks, and God bless.
me.
nagpo
06-27-2008, 01:11 PM
I see.
bilal
06-27-2008, 01:50 PM
\m/ ..... \m/
TrulyAmazing
06-28-2008, 10:11 PM
I will send the rest to any regulars to this site willing to give their email address. Legally I am not allowed to give this song away, but I accept any email as payment. cst-2238152199. Please respect my privacy and do not send it outside this site.I will have cd's and tabs available in 2 months. these songs are in production, so please please please dont share the files with anyone. I just want feedback from yall. Thanks, and God bless.
me.
i really dont need to read the rest Just Awsome Stuff what i like about these lines chris it shows and paints a glimpse OF HARD LIKE FAITH that grows by fire A BURIED FAITH INSIDE CANT HELP TO HIDE CONTEMPT FROM YOU thats a strong verse THAT BURIED FAITH We All Share Man Thank you So Much For Sharing Your Stuff With Us Blessings And Strengeth :jam: :jam:
Dogstar
07-12-2008, 09:25 PM
Very cool, metalchris. It sounds promising. Keep us posted.
metalchris25
07-13-2008, 02:58 AM
Here is some more of it. I forgot about posting it here. Hope you like the rest of it, though it is not all of it, I left the ending out.
" Give Me Back " (just a working title, but will probably be the actual title)
(v1)
i could tell you that I love myself
but I know that its not true
A buried faith inside cant help
to hide contempt for you
the empty shell you left behind
and things we left unsaid
haunt my sleep till I cant find
my way out of my head
seek out destroyed memories
images fractured bring me to my knees
I cry out to you bleeding out my soul
No one answers, IVE FINALLY LOST CONTROL
(chorus)
Give me back all that you stole from me
i recalaim all that is rightfully mine
Give me back what you ripped away
Im stuck here in the threads of time,
so,
GIVE ME BACK!
(v2)
Let me get back on my feet
You dont have to keep me down
Blinded love could never see
that we cannot turn around
the feelings that we try to deny
have us caught in this circle of joy and foolish pride
Our inner selves that we supressed so long
are the ones that we can never hide
(Chorus2)
So
Give me back my indignity
show me the man I used to be
Give me back the assurance of truth
Let it all bleed back out of you
this time
GIVE ME BACK
(V3)
(INTERLUDE SOLO)
(chorus3)
TrulyAmazing
07-13-2008, 11:43 PM
Incredible hardcore you can feel an overcoming vibe in those verses STRONG STANDING LYRICS Loved It Blessings And Strengeth :jam: :jam:
metalchris25
07-14-2008, 02:31 AM
thanks. this is a warmup video I was just toying around with a while back, but I took some of it and used it in the recording of this song.
http://myspacetv.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=36598497
TrulyAmazing
07-17-2008, 08:47 PM
thanks. this is a warmup video I was just toying around with a while back, but I took some of it and used it in the recording of this song.
http://myspacetv.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=36598497
awsome its great toying around a playing with diffrent stuff to complete a piece and what i find funny :D did you ever go out of your way to take a piece of something and you just know and feel this is going be it and then how ever hard you try to make it work or fit you come back with your own original sound :D i would love to see the video bub but i cant get your link to open
metalchris25
07-20-2008, 02:17 AM
http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=36598497
http://www.youtube.com/user/metaltolliver
TrulyAmazing
07-21-2008, 07:26 PM
thank you for reposting the link It was Real :jam: :jam:
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