Towels in, lights are out pt. 1

[nagpo]

Peace to my heart
Please no more inferno
Veins rush with blood
Because of the...
Love bitten inferno

These feelings inside
I cannot hide
I'll burst if I do
So I must express my love for you

All I can think of is you
The inferno inside,
Is the excitement I feel when im near you
My blood pumps with anticipation
Fire bitten love

So, peace to my heart
Please no more inferno
Veins rush with blood
Because of the...
Love bitten inferno

[nagpo]

should i add "when im near you" to the end of "Is the excitement I feel"?

[HeavensOnFire]

should i add "when im near you" to the end of "Is the excitement I feel"?
:) you could,

[nagpo]

:) you could,
i'll try it. what do yall think

[nagpo]

shit i hate this pile of trash

[TrulyAmazing]

shit i hate this pile of trash
haaaaa we are revisting potery that we think now sucks no serious this was written with skills of briliance i thought it was anyways it reminds me of passion and warfare the constant warfare of the battle of blood inferno flesh

[nagpo]

really? it was about a girl. i let her read it and told her it was about her and she was like "umm okay"

i can't believe i asked her out after that. I can't believe i was surprised she said no.

[TrulyAmazing]

really? it was about a girl. i let her read it and told her it was about her and she was like "umm okay"

i can't believe i asked her out after that. I can't believe i was surprised she said no.
mabey then she was more of the flowers and butterflies and hearts type a potery type not in to the thrills and chills in stuff like hot infernos , in stuff likey that its really deep and passion like

[nagpo]

honestly, i think she was to young. and, i didint know this at the time, she already had a boyfriend. the thing that sucks is, she was the first girl i ever asked out, lol. not a very good experience.

[TrulyAmazing]

honestly, i think she was to young. and, i didint know this at the time, she already had a boyfriend. the thing that sucks is, she was the first girl i ever asked out, lol. not a very good experience.
no not a very good experince well my friend thats her lose your an awsome writer no she should have dumed that other guy :) if she may have been more older and experinced should would have a since too and to appreciate good potery....

[nagpo]

ha thanks

[TrulyAmazing]

ha thanks
your welcome