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Dogstar
07-17-2006, 08:42 PM
I haven't written in ages, but today I felt the urge. The fruits of my labored labor :D:

Black Gold

The tainted chalice sears their soiled hands
As they raise it up in shallow victory
For all to see and bow accordingly

The bullies ascend their pulpits
As they thump their chests in earnest
So haughty are the unmasked marauders

They feign disdain for the blistering pain
As they justify their deluded quest
To be the kings of the bountiful hill

Trampling resolve
Wringing out the red
Bite the rotten apple
Chew until you’ve bled

Itchy fingers trigger the gunslingers
As they shred their knowing victims
With a barrage of rhetoric worn thin

The misguided lemmings take their places
As they horde their buckets of black gold
Chanting reason is treason in unison

Trampling resolve
Wringing out the red
Feed the green disease
Drink until you’re dead

inside_us_all04
07-18-2006, 11:38 PM
tottaly awsome, really sharp imagry,,


p.s cudo's for takin the name of a killer soul asylum song name too;)

bilal
07-19-2006, 11:39 AM
wow.......there wasnt one line in which i did.nt flip the dictionary......thanks for adding couple to my vocabulary.... apart.... wonderful iimages kept comin.....

Dogstar
07-19-2006, 01:42 PM
:D Thanks much, you guys :)

Rocketqueen
08-24-2006, 02:14 AM
Thank You Doggy for me that was a visual of what i see that taunts me i really liked the unmasked part DOGGY Loved It ....it relly help let out that Godly Anger that dont cease ...Nagpo wrote a few of his in a couple of threads that like AHHHHHHHH a nerve Relaxer Again Awsome Work!!! Doggy

Dogstar
08-29-2006, 09:25 PM
Thanks as always, Rocketqueen :)

Rocketqueen
08-31-2006, 10:45 PM
Thanks as always, Rocketqueen :) thanks as Always Doggy i love your use for words As always :)

bilal
12-22-2006, 02:46 PM
came back for this one..... :D

nagpo
12-22-2006, 04:12 PM
came back for this one..... :D
holy crud this threads old

Dogstar
12-23-2006, 01:25 PM
LOL, bilal :hugs:

GrafiTTied
12-24-2006, 08:01 AM
Wow.......just wow......

HeavensOnFire
12-26-2006, 10:16 PM
holy crud this threads old
not really but its always up for topic, :) i love such topics even more so whatching trip over their own lies,untill they believe theme and fade so give,me their due,But WIPING you out was the masters master plan ;) HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, its all condradiction anyway ,

HeavensOnFire
12-26-2006, 10:21 PM
[QUOTE=bilal]came back for this one. j/k haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, it was awsome good potery can make you feel so much better

HeavensOnFire
05-12-2007, 02:19 AM
came back for this one..... :D
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ME TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, MUHEHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, :flamer:

HeavensOnFire
05-12-2007, 02:22 AM
holy crud this threads old
:D I KNOW IT But not a day goes by ;) it does not cross my mine

Dogstar
05-12-2007, 10:53 AM
Hehe, thanks, sis :D.

HeavensOnFire
05-12-2007, 03:59 PM
Hehe, thanks, sis :D.
YOUR WELCOME DOGGY :jam: :jam: :jam:

HeavensOnFire
06-10-2007, 03:33 PM
wow.......there wasnt one line in which i did.nt flip the dictionary......thanks for adding couple to my vocabulary.... apart.... wonderful iimages kept comin.....
Yes I Know It, I AINT GONNA EAT I AINT GONNA SLEEP AINT GOING BREATHE TILL I SEE WHAT I WANNA SEE IS YOU GO TO SLEEP IN THE DIRT PERMANENTLY YOU JUST BEING HURT THIS AINT GOING WORK FOR ME IT JUST WOULD,NT BE SUFFCIENT ENOUGH CUZ WE ARE JUST GOING TO BE ENIEMIES AS LONG AS WE BREATHE I DONT EVER SEE EITHER OF US COMING TO TERMS WHEN WE BOTH CAN AGREE THERE AINT GOING BE NO REASONING SPEAKING WITH ME YOU SPEAK ON MY SEED THEN ME SPEAK AH NO ENG~LESS SO WE GOING TO BEEF AND KEEP ON BEEFING UNLESS YOU GOING AGREE TO MEET WITH ME IN THE FLESH AND SETTLE THIS FACE TO FACE AND YOU GOING SEE A DEAMON UNLEASHED IN ME THAT YOU AINT NEVER SEEN AND YOU GOING TO SEE THIS GANSTA PEE ON HIMSELF I SEE YOU AND THANKS BUT ME NEED NO HELP ME DO THIS ONE ALL BY MY LONLEY I DONT NEED 15 Of My HOMIES

HeavensOnFire
06-10-2007, 03:39 PM
When I See You Im Seeing You Me And You Only We Never Met But Best Believe You Gon Know Me When Im This Close To See You Exposed As Phony Come On B()*()ch Pick Me Up Throw Me Lift Me Up Hold Me Just Like You Told Me U Was Going To Do Thats What I Thought Your Pitfull Im Rid Of You All You Ja You,ll Get It Too Now Go To Sleep B()))ch Die M&*(&& F&*&&cker Die Why Are Yopu Still Alive Go To Sleep B*(&(&ch We Got You F*&()*ckers Nervous On Purpose To Hurt Ya Foucus Not Emcees Yous Worthless A Circus Yous No Appeal Yous Curtains You Use Words Kewl Herds Slurred In 200 Thirds Yous Perpin Oh Yous No Threat Whos Ya Serving

HeavensOnFire
06-10-2007, 03:44 PM
WHEN LYRICALLY IMMA BURY YOU BEANEATH THE DIRT WHEN U F*()*(*CKED WITH A LABEL OVERSEEING THE EARTH SHADY M*(&*((THER F&*((&CER OH CHRIST IS BIRTH AS I MOLD I BECOME MORE CURSED SO WE CAN PUT DOWN THE VERSE TAKE IT TO THE TURF &**^^&^ AND SQUEEZE AND HE WHO REACH THE HEARSE IS HE WHO DEPICTS FICTION IN THIS VERSE AND AS I BREATHE AND YOU BE DECEASED THE WORLD BELIEVE YOU DECIEVE JUST TO SPEAK YOUs NOT THE STREETS YOUS THE DESK USE NOT YOUR CHEST PHONY USE YOUR VEST BEFORE 2 SHOES YOU REST YOU CHOSE DEATH SIXFEET DEEP THAT THE DEPTH

HeavensOnFire
06-10-2007, 03:49 PM
Now Go To Sleep B(**ch Die ^&&(*(moth @*^*( F*(#%^& Die Uh Times Uppppppppp B(*()*)ch Close Your Eyes Bye Bye M&***f&*&& Why Are U Still Alive All Of You Fake A&*()* F&&(*ck**) No More Press No More Press Rot And Decay In The Dirt B***itch In The Dirt And Oh Die Nameless No More Fame

HeavensOnFire
06-10-2007, 03:52 PM
Doggy do forgive my explit lyrics of translating Of what Black Gold Meant To Me, to any of our senstive readers and members i do apoalagize Love U guys And peace be with ya,s :hugs: :hugs:

Dogstar
06-11-2007, 12:55 AM
This is what is wild about writing. So many messages to be had. No worries, as you censored yourself with the language :D.

HeavensOnFire
06-13-2007, 07:38 PM
thank you kerri THE DOG !!! i promise if something else comes to mind from my views and prespectives on black gold i,ll be sure and post it,

HeavensOnFire
09-06-2007, 09:44 AM
WHEN LYRICALLY IMMA BURY YOU BEANEATH THE DIRT WHEN U F*()*(*CKED WITH A LABEL OVERSEEING THE EARTH SHADY M*(&*((THER F&*((&CER OH CHRIST IS BIRTH AS I MOLD I BECOME MORE CURSED SO WE CAN PUT DOWN THE VERSE TAKE IT TO THE TURF &**^^&^ AND SQUEEZE AND HE WHO REACH THE HEARSE IS HE WHO DEPICTS FICTION IN THIS VERSE AND AS I BREATHE AND YOU BE DECEASED THE WORLD BELIEVE YOU DECIEVE JUST TO SPEAK YOUs NOT THE STREETS YOUS THE DESK USE NOT YOUR CHEST PHONY USE YOUR VEST BEFORE 2 SHOES YOU REST YOU CHOSE DEATH SIXFEET DEEP THAT THE DEPTH
i felt like revisting AND feelings are still the same WOE Unto YOU THAT are rich for ye have received your consolation WOE unto you that are full for ye shall hunger WOE unto you that laugh now for for ye shall mourn and weep WOE unto you when all men shall speak well of yaaaaaaaaaaa for so did their fathers to the false prophets

Dogstar
09-17-2007, 07:27 PM
:) :hugs:

HeavensOnFire
09-18-2007, 09:45 AM
:) :hugs:
you know dog as the diverse meanings takes on its on thread haaaaaaaaaa 4 words may be the hidden sum here VERLIY I SAY WOE :hugs:

Dogstar
09-18-2007, 06:21 PM
Exactly. Many meanings, indeed.

HeavensOnFire
09-21-2007, 12:42 AM
Exactly. Many meanings, indeed.
:hugs: :hugs: i know it my friend ***VERLIY VERLIY I SAID WOE

TrulyAmazing
10-27-2007, 09:10 AM
This is what is wild about writing. So many messages to be had. No worries, as you censored yourself with the language :D.
interesting thread guys very interesting :)

TrulyAmazing
06-17-2008, 08:13 PM
Exactly. Many meanings, indeed.
:D i felt like revisting today :jam: :jam: Just A really Good One Dog really Good it makes you wanna sing WHEN HIS SAINTS COME MARCHING IN GLORY, just a briliant piece of work Dog briliant peace

Dogstar
06-25-2008, 02:34 AM
Awww, many thanks, sis.

TrulyAmazing
06-26-2008, 09:25 AM
Awww, many thanks, sis.
Your Welcome Doggy Revisting Again Today :jam: :jam: GLORY

TrulyAmazing
08-17-2010, 06:45 PM
Yes I Know It, I AINT GONNA EAT I AINT GONNA SLEEP AINT GOING BREATHE TILL I SEE WHAT I WANNA SEE IS YOU GO TO SLEEP IN THE DIRT PERMANENTLY YOU JUST BEING HURT THIS AINT GOING WORK FOR ME IT JUST WOULD,NT BE SUFFCIENT ENOUGH CUZ WE ARE JUST GOING TO BE ENIEMIES AS LONG AS WE BREATHE I DONT EVER SEE EITHER OF US COMING TO TERMS WHEN WE BOTH CAN AGREE THERE AINT GOING BE NO REASONING SPEAKING WITH ME YOU SPEAK ON MY SEED THEN ME SPEAK AH NO ENG~LESS SO WE GOING TO BEEF AND KEEP ON BEEFING UNLESS YOU GOING AGREE TO MEET WITH ME IN THE FLESH AND SETTLE THIS FACE TO FACE AND YOU GOING SEE A DEAMON UNLEASHED IN ME THAT YOU AINT NEVER SEEN AND YOU GOING TO SEE THIS GANSTA PEE ON HIMSELF I SEE YOU AND THANKS BUT ME NEED NO HELP ME DO THIS ONE ALL BY MY LONLEY I DONT NEED 15 Of My HOMIES where we are are today, :roll: :roll: keri, i have had blackgold on my mind all day, PRAISE JESUS, thanks for the updates, dont give up on writing girl friend, thanks for the updates, ...........:rockon: AB 3 is upcoming, but im sure you know that, :laugh:

Dogstar
08-30-2010, 03:03 PM
Hey, sis! I need to put the pen to the paper. Haven't done it in a while.

TrulyAmazing
08-30-2010, 09:16 PM
Hey, sis! I need to put the pen to the paper. Haven't done it in a while.
yeah, i know it i got plenty stuff on the back burner as well, in wating....:rockon:

TrulyAmazing
02-18-2011, 10:28 PM
felt like revisting Dog, This Be My All Time Fave, i think except For Golden Jesus, it brings me comfort,