the vase

[metalanus]

based on a short story called odor of chrysanthemums

flowers on the floor
fallen from a broken vase
knocked off in a hurried rush
to deliver the news of a tragic death

round like a womb
sustaining life inside
shattered in an instant
leaving sharp edges behind

she looks into the mirror
knowing its the end
the child inside has died
with the odor of chrysantheums

who will be the man
to peice her together again
who will be the man
to place his seed in her

noone

[Rocketqueen]

interesting

[bilal]

hmmm...nice comparision of the vase though....but should;nt she be worried about the loss rather than who will be the man.........i guess it has to do with the context of the book u refered that i dont know about....hmmmm

[Rocketqueen]

hmmm...nice comparision of the vase though....but should;nt she be worried about the loss rather than who will be the man.........i guess it has to do with the context of the book u refered that i dont know about....hmmmm
This Piece Of Potery Is Missing A Lot Of Pieces i think and the time of the wrting was kinda off but not much using that book was great idea i think It Worked Context is all good ....AMEN AND AMEN