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nagpo
05-30-2006, 06:00 PM
You've harased me for the last time
You feel the need i know the crime
To insecure to notice I am you're brother
Keep on cause now I seek my vengeance

(chorus)
Slash and burn
You've gone and made a wrong turn

Dust and Rust
Your train is gonna bust

Chains and whips
Too late your all fucked up
(end)

You've broken all the peices
To your heart and to your soul
If this is how we treat peace then the world is headed for trouble


(chorus)
Dust and Rust
Your train is gonna bust

Slash and burn
You've gone and made a wrong turn

Chains and whips
Too late your all fucked up
(end)

I may not be you
But I am what I am
And that is all I have to be
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this is actually an older song i wrote, but i never finished. well since i havent been able to write a song recently i had decided to go back and finish this little guy. tell you the truth i dont even think its that good.

Rocketqueen
06-03-2006, 01:25 AM
well to be hontest i liked it, and the closing as well it puts me in mind of someone WHO Said Unto Thee I Will Not Hold My Peace :jam: :jam: :jam: it lets off some Pressure For Me :mad1: After Viewing A Short Program Of Man Who Was Called A Messagner Of God Chains And Whips Too Late YOUR ALL FUCKED UP!!!! he he now i dont know when ya wrote your there but i so much needed to read it right now, AWSOME WORK BEAUTIFUL!!!!

Rocketqueen
06-03-2006, 01:40 AM
I Love What I,am :jam: :jam: And FUCK you all in silents your mask burns before me so slick so smooth ya will never see me coming oh know oh know not this time >>>> its so peacefull to be here tonite among all of you awsome writers , woe unto you that desire the day of the lord to what end is it for you the day of the lord is darkness and not light as if a man did flee from a lion and a bear met him, or went into his house and leaned his hand on the wall and a serpent bit him shall not the day of the lord be darkness and not light even very dark and no brightness in it i hate and i despise your feast days and i will not smell in your solem assemblies though ye offer me burnt oferings i will not accept theme neither will i regard the peace offerings of your fat beasts take thou away from me the noise of thy songs for i will not hear the melody of thy viols but let judgment run down as waters and righteousness as mighty stream, :jam: :jam:

nagpo
06-07-2006, 05:17 PM
thnx

Rocketqueen
06-09-2006, 02:33 AM
:roll: :roll: your welcome ...IT KICKED ASS!!!!