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MissSeeker
04-03-2006, 06:37 AM
god knows
we need to come home
hungry and thristy
always longing for that day
of fullfillment
out of this prison
out of pain and fear

noone knows
why we're here
it's a strange place
of death and fear
where we're not free
to be weak
why are we so exposed

somehow I know
this place is a trauma to our soul
we're like a candle in the wind
burning away
I know we were somewhere
before this
in a better place

take me home
where it smells like heaven
where there's no more pain
only this blast of exctasy
just knowing we're free
why are we here
in this place of fear

Rocketqueen
04-03-2006, 11:17 AM
:thumbsup: wonderfull poem misseeker and it seems to me you lived your life like a candle in the wind nver knowing who to clang too when the rain set in candle in the wind Elton John great song great poem your line brought to mind k I LOVE THAT SONG we,re like a candle in the wind burning away

MissSeeker
04-03-2006, 03:01 PM
Thanks!

Rocketqueen
04-04-2006, 11:31 PM
your welcome :