Traumatize:

[GrafiTTied]

well my first poem to be posted here. Hope you guys like it?
not one of my best, but one that relates closely to my life.

TRAUMATIZE:

The power of dreams has no extremes
Its limits are as far as the galaxies.
But what happens when it all comes down
Like a tower of crumbling cards
And the light has burnt out from your stars
When you find you have lost your rhyme
Look around and find yourself lost in time
Nothing to keep your sights on,
Nothing to support your once strong iron
Now it rusts and soon will disintegrate into its once natural dust form.

Now shall I live without visions and aspirations?
No precisions, no decisions
Put my life into the hands of someone else
To be molded into something else
Likes and dislikes of my incarnate
Forces me to impersonate
Struggle to find myself again,
Again and again, but in vain
Soon I shall retreat and be void of all senses
A life bound to blurred with powerful lenses
I look up, my eyes with colors of white and gray
Stricken with neutrality, despairs prey.
So long, you shall see no more of me
An idol loved by everyone,
But hated by me.

[Rocketqueen]

i enjoyed it very much a lot stuff very relateful and a wide range of aspects

[MissSeeker]

I enjoyed it too, great song.

[GrafiTTied]

thanks i'll try to post more!